GinOokami

*DISCLAIMER: THIS WILL PROBABLY BE A RUSHED AND SHORT NOVEL BECAUSE I INTEND TO FINISH IT FAST. THE REASON WILL BE ON THE AUXILIARY CHAPTER.

THE COVER PICTURE BELONGED TO THE CREATOR. ALTHOUGH I DID EDIT A LITTLE BIT, IF YOU ARE THE ORIGINAL CREATOR OF THE IMAGE AND UNCOMFORTABLE FOR ME USING IT, DO TELL ME AND I WILL DELETE IT RIGHT AWAY.

THE NAMES USED IN THIS NOVEL ARE PURELY FICTIONAL.

AND ALSO, FOR THOSE THAT ARE CURRENTLY FACING DEPRESSION OR SOMETHING SIMILAR, PLEASE CONSULT TO YOUR LOVED ONES AND/OR A TRUSTED THERAPIST. DEATH IS NOT THE WAY TO GO.

ENGLISH IS NOT MY FIRST LANGUAGE, SO EXPECT GRAMMAR ERRORS AND VOCABULARIES BEING USED OVER AND OVER AGAIN. I WILL TRY TO FIX THIS ISSUE OF MINE, SO PLEASE BE PATIENT WITH ME.*

THIS IS 18+ NOVEL SO PROCEED WITH CAUTION

Ray Purnomo, an Indonesian citizen with a certain illness. A ruined family, betrayal, and unemployment for more than 5 years made him took a risky decision.

He expects a fiery hell waiting on the other side. But to his surprise, what greeted him was a classroom from his high school years. Before he can make sense of anything, time was stopped by a being with strength that he cannot fathom.

Reaching Godhood on Earth

It's quite hard for me to actually read the comments because I know how shit this novel has been. But I'm grateful for your critics.


Just going to be honest with everyone here, I have a bullet list for the plot that I want this novel to take. But then, like what I usually do, I went too far from the original plot list.


I re-read the bullet list and compared them to the story that I have now and I can proudly say that this novel is shit. I do want to complete this novel, but it seems that the flow of this novel is so... broken that even myself doesn't want to read the chapters that I have write.


I realize that making an 'original' novel is very hard, especially when I'm a stupid and not a creative person. But I do hope to write an original someday and publish it either here on to an official publisher in my country.


Now, I did say that I write a DxD fanfiction in the last chapter. I think I have 4 or 5 chapters there. To summarize, it's your typical DxD fanfic about a reincarnated person born all the way back before the story starts. There are some world-travel elements already built there. Meaning that the existence of other worlds is visible, unlike this novel.


A novel of harem building and also the MC is very OP. Like I mean really fucking OP. Not from the start but immediately became one some chapters later.


I will post the chapters right after I write this. It's called "Journey Starts in DxD". If you cannot find it in the search bar, I suggest for everyone to wait for 5 more minutes.


Be warned that I do not edit the chapters using Grammarly or any writer tool software whatsoever. Because it was 4000+ words long per chapter and I need to get it out now so I hope everyone can understand.


Once I'm done uploading the chapters of my other novel, I will make another chapter but this time as an auxiliary chapter in this novel.


As much as I'm a man with a glass of a heart, I want everyone (if possible) to say what is wrong with this novel. Does the cafe thing is not, for the lack of a better word, appropriate for this type of novel? Is the "betrayal arc" not satisfactory? Any suggestion on how I should make things move forward?


I'm looking forward for your suggestions in the comments, both in this chapter and the future auxiliary chapter.


An Important Non-Chapter