I think it is coming together but chapters need to be longer and there needs to be more detail. Also watch your grammar. Overall if you update consistently I think this could turn out to be something although I can’t say there is much I enjoyed reading what was here.
I think it is coming together but chapters need to be longer and there needs to be more detail. Also watch your grammar. Overall if you update consistently I think this could turn out to be something although I can’t say there is much I enjoyed reading what was here.