The Devil's Bride

This one has a good concept for a novel. Though the progress is a little bit slow, i hope there will be more chapters release instead of just 1 chapter per day 😅 but I still love the idea, good luck author😊

I think the author should elaborate more on the surrounding/environment of the story, or maybe it is just me being fast pace 😅 story development was a little slow for me, I hope that this story will have continues daily updates

I'm totally fall in love with this novel! The concept is different than the other novel I have read before. I love how the characters and the story's development so far. I just hope that the author won't stop writing

I quite like this story so far and feel like you have a solid start, however I would look into getting an editor. While you don’t make spelling mistakes, you have made quite a few grammatical mistakes, especially when it comes to tenses. Make sure that if you use present tense you don’t switch to using past tense half way through your sentence and vice verses. Other wise, I look forward to reading this novel and I hope to see more updates in the future. Keep it up! :)