Gotta put another review on this other than just thumbs up emoji this book/story has quite a large amount of potential I personally have a hard time finding Books/stories that have modern weapons and fantasy same thing with the main character being a beastkin I'm very happy it wasn't dropped.
5 years ago
3
Heiko41
I am not a fan of modern guns+ Fantasy so I won't be reading a lot but the writing style is good although there are some grammar mistakes it's probably fixed the more it goes on, and the start is slightly cliche but I'll ignore that.
5 years ago
2
RedLaw
An interesting start. The first chapter is the usual death and meeting with a superior being that we all like. What follows is pretty cool. I didn't read much as of now but the few chapters I read gave me positive impressions.
My only fear is about how the mc will use his power since it extremely OP but at the same time super weak. The balance can be easily destroyed if the author don't pay enough attention.
Anyway I put this story in my library and will slowly read it.
6 years ago
2
Aragami9
I read up to chapter 7. It's weeaboo stuff. Gave it a 3 because it reminded me of anime tropes that I don't like and I didn't want to just drop a 0
6 years ago
1
IgorRSAW
The story goes well, and the writing is not bad so the grade is appropriate.
I took a little note of my personal taste, because the author said there will be harem in the story, and I hate harem.
6 years ago
1
FaIzoShu
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Mr. Author, I would like to know if this novel is going to be harem?
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6 years ago
1
Doris_Clinton
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5 years ago
0
Zenobia
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5 years ago
0
Piotr_Uklejewski
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5 years ago
0
Grant_Dunlop
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5 years ago
0
RandomchaoS
The plot is interesting, and the characters are well written. There were a few instances when spelling or grammar was incorrect. However, it doesn't mess with the flow of the story.
For anyone into action and adventure as well as anyone who likes harem I'd encourage you to read this <3
It's also a lot of fun because the author interacts with people who comment :D
Gotta put another review on this other than just thumbs up emoji this book/story has quite a large amount of potential I personally have a hard time finding Books/stories that have modern weapons and fantasy same thing with the main character being a beastkin I'm very happy it wasn't dropped.
I am not a fan of modern guns+ Fantasy so I won't be reading a lot but the writing style is good although there are some grammar mistakes it's probably fixed the more it goes on, and the start is slightly cliche but I'll ignore that.
An interesting start. The first chapter is the usual death and meeting with a superior being that we all like. What follows is pretty cool. I didn't read much as of now but the few chapters I read gave me positive impressions. My only fear is about how the mc will use his power since it extremely OP but at the same time super weak. The balance can be easily destroyed if the author don't pay enough attention. Anyway I put this story in my library and will slowly read it.
I read up to chapter 7. It's weeaboo stuff. Gave it a 3 because it reminded me of anime tropes that I don't like and I didn't want to just drop a 0
The story goes well, and the writing is not bad so the grade is appropriate. I took a little note of my personal taste, because the author said there will be harem in the story, and I hate harem.
************************************************************************** Mr. Author, I would like to know if this novel is going to be harem? **************************************************************************
Hi there! Are you looking for inspiration? You might want to check out our Prompts Writing contest! Apocalypse, Isekai, LitRPG... Follow the three provided prompts and take the chance to win up to $2,000! Please Google 70daysthemedwritingchallenge to find out more! This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact ringdom_promptswriting@hotmail.com Good luck for writing!
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc
************* Good Worka! ************** ****************************************** *************And I need more! *********** ******************************************
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The plot is interesting, and the characters are well written. There were a few instances when spelling or grammar was incorrect. However, it doesn't mess with the flow of the story. For anyone into action and adventure as well as anyone who likes harem I'd encourage you to read this <3 It's also a lot of fun because the author interacts with people who comment :D
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