Sensei u story interesting and great ,, with smart and op mc i like it and if u can get all main chara girl become our mc part harem it will perfect 😂 😂 😂
5 years ago
9
Kenric_Brown
I love this story and sincefly hope you continue it it’s quality is well done I can only hope you make a personal doujutsu that isn’t overpowered and would probably be on the same level and potential as the sharingan
5 years ago
9
Sekanih
Awesome book with great characters 👌👍
Author _san good work 👍👍.... Please stop keeping waiting for to long, can't bear the suspense 🧘🙈
5 years ago
3
Myke
I really like the story so far, also enjoying the MC's(Sango) personality. The Harem also looks to be like it'll be a good one as the story progresses(Author-chan don't forget romance).
I've never been too good at reviews so is the story worth reading? Yes, it is! :)
5 years ago
3
here_iam
I rarely put a review but I must say the novel is to my liking, the mc is not naive that follow the rules blindly nor a beta mc, he acts to what benefits him, he doesn't trust blindly and that rare in the fanfics, I don't have many words to add but I hope you add more chapters and don't stop the novel.
it would be good if the mc built a secret force to use them and put out his chakra to better use.
and I hope you add Tsunade and Mei to his women list.
anyway thanks for the nice work
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note: English is not my first so sorry for the errors
exp , this is good pls continue this author, I like how the mc are smart and how strong he is and pls improve his teleportation like minato that can teleport with just a tap
4 years ago
1
BLACKBULB
author can you continue this? this is so fucking good and I love the way that he can hold every girl, how he plotted everything and how smart he is.
4 years ago
1
Ramenguy_teuchi
yea it's pretty good man damn. the development it's quite unique and the mc background though, why he spend his time to watch naruto when he chased by the organisation. but yea that's pretty unique. i think he's the only assassin was a weaboo haha
4 years ago
1
SuzakuOkita
Retarted Mc
Charem
stupid and ugly charakters build
Autor try hard make magical FF but hy lose fight with world....
He write wird and stupid things...
4 years ago
1
Harem_fan
THIS IS IT!
The story finally lives up to its name at this current chapter I am writing this review and it was worth it.
READ THIS!................................................................................................................
5 years ago
1
LifeIsAboutChoices
As of now there is nothing sexual about this novel. MC is still collecting girls left and right, mission arc(s), etc., etc. So wait till chapter 400 I guess for there to be anything to do with title.
5 years ago
1
Duemos
This is an interesting spin on the original Naruto story line, I am enjoying it thoroughly! Please keep doing your best. The character development is great as well. Kurenai is one hot mama for sure. I wish I could see a picture of the main character:) Both Danzo and orochimaru will make great additions to the for line up. I wonder if he will come in contact with the Akatsuki at some point. I like the different P.OV. you added as well, I am looking forward to the next chapter! As a female reading this story I can say it is interesting , has very amazing build up and is well grounded with intention<3
5 years ago
1
DearCompanion
☆ special new year's giveaway ☆
I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read.
Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere.
You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels.
I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time.
They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does.
Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them.
He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave.
I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time.
That type of MC is cringe a.f.
Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list.
What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on
There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅
and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors
If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet
That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
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Sensei u story interesting and great ,, with smart and op mc i like it and if u can get all main chara girl become our mc part harem it will perfect 😂 😂 😂
I love this story and sincefly hope you continue it it’s quality is well done I can only hope you make a personal doujutsu that isn’t overpowered and would probably be on the same level and potential as the sharingan
Awesome book with great characters 👌👍 Author _san good work 👍👍.... Please stop keeping waiting for to long, can't bear the suspense 🧘🙈
I really like the story so far, also enjoying the MC's(Sango) personality. The Harem also looks to be like it'll be a good one as the story progresses(Author-chan don't forget romance). I've never been too good at reviews so is the story worth reading? Yes, it is! :)
I rarely put a review but I must say the novel is to my liking, the mc is not naive that follow the rules blindly nor a beta mc, he acts to what benefits him, he doesn't trust blindly and that rare in the fanfics, I don't have many words to add but I hope you add more chapters and don't stop the novel. it would be good if the mc built a secret force to use them and put out his chakra to better use. and I hope you add Tsunade and Mei to his women list. anyway thanks for the nice work ----------------------- note: English is not my first so sorry for the errors
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exp , this is good pls continue this author, I like how the mc are smart and how strong he is and pls improve his teleportation like minato that can teleport with just a tap
author can you continue this? this is so fucking good and I love the way that he can hold every girl, how he plotted everything and how smart he is.
yea it's pretty good man damn. the development it's quite unique and the mc background though, why he spend his time to watch naruto when he chased by the organisation. but yea that's pretty unique. i think he's the only assassin was a weaboo haha
Retarted Mc Charem stupid and ugly charakters build Autor try hard make magical FF but hy lose fight with world.... He write wird and stupid things...
THIS IS IT! The story finally lives up to its name at this current chapter I am writing this review and it was worth it. READ THIS!................................................................................................................
As of now there is nothing sexual about this novel. MC is still collecting girls left and right, mission arc(s), etc., etc. So wait till chapter 400 I guess for there to be anything to do with title.
This is an interesting spin on the original Naruto story line, I am enjoying it thoroughly! Please keep doing your best. The character development is great as well. Kurenai is one hot mama for sure. I wish I could see a picture of the main character:) Both Danzo and orochimaru will make great additions to the for line up. I wonder if he will come in contact with the Akatsuki at some point. I like the different P.OV. you added as well, I am looking forward to the next chapter! As a female reading this story I can say it is interesting , has very amazing build up and is well grounded with intention<3
☆ special new year's giveaway ☆ I know how frustated it was for you to find something decent to read. Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere. You can download it here -> bit .ly/haremnovel for free. It's based on our years of experience tasting different novels. I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time. They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does. Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them. He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave. I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time. That type of MC is cringe a.f. Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list. What are you waiting for? Just go -> bit. ly/haremnovel . Or Do you still want to read something that made your beastmode on There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? 🤔 I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! 👎😅 and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.