When Glaze Lockhart was summoned to another world to save it from the Demon King , he had no intention to save the world and work as a minion for the King and plots to kill him and take control of the Everheart Kingdom , here begins his story of becoming the villain himself that the world needs to be saved from.
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Never written fiction before in my life. Will be counting on you fellow daoists for feedback. Gonna be shameless and give myself a 5 star review. You can expect a bit of politics, backstabbing and overall a very scum baggy evil protagonist.
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The story is pretty great, I saw it in the discord and wanted to try. I was intrigued by the synopsis and the story didn't disappoint. The mc isn't some beta pushover that let everyone walk over him. Neither is he some hypocritical CN mc. I like him. The story is solid, with a system and isekai. This story is gold. I hope the author will continue
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I know this story is still early on, but absolutely amazing so far. I’m looking forward to more from this author. Definitely a hidden gem and looking forward to more. Thanks for the great story
overall i enjoyed the story, happy with the development found this story looking for an evil mc and im pleased hope formtje author to remember us tho its been dry these past 11 months
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Writing quality is terrible. Many grammatical errors as well as a lack of proper sentence flow shows little care for the story. Updating quality is also terrible as its no longer updated. Story development is trash as it creeps by hidden underneath boring character arcs. Character design is utterly annoying. Mc lacks confidence of his background and doesn't handle himself in a way that's conducive to his background. Side characters are hollow and unimpressive as well and don't offer meaningful interaction but instead feel like filler material. World background is bland and uninteresting. This light novel has potential as a story but the author fails miserably to deliver it in a beautiful, entertaining, and intoxicating manner. Instead we are left with a flat and dull story that uninteresting crawls by without giving anything to the reader for their time.
Writing Quality: 3/5. Good English writing, nothing exceptional but readable. The structure of the novel may create some discomfort. Stability of Updates: 1/5. The reason is clear. Story Development: 4/5. I advise you to read the work only for the story, satisfying and original. It loses some points for the sudden change of the protagonist. Character Design: 3/5. Pretty good characters. Too sudden change of protagonist. World Background: 3/5. Little described places. They are original places, you cannot imagine the environment well.
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