This is one of the best story have read so far keep up the good work. i hope to see more chapters. it is amazing i recommend it for people to read it. i like how detail the book is so far
5 years ago
6
Tmacistalosa
booom ya love this story. I am the number ten to rate this what sup people. I recommend for ya to read this novel it is amazing ya will love it
5 years ago
4
NightOps
Story jumps from plot to plot and has very little build up of events or world. Grammar is good and I never fault a writer for updates, unless they make promises they don't keep.
5 years ago
3
BellaEstrellaLiNa
Keep up the good work bella. I am liking this story. I started reading yesterday I can't wait to read more about this amazing story. As for the haters that you have I have 2 words for them Suck it
5 years ago
3
lmmastumadre
opppa. this is what I call an op FL. she kick ass. I am loving the face that it aint starting off slow. the amount of chapter being release is amazing as well keep up the good work
5 years ago
2
YuriMaster
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos.
Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”.
No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.
5 years ago
1
Lomyril
Reveal Spoiler
5 years ago
1
BellaEstrella
Shameless author here. I hope that everyone is enjoying my light novel I will be posting more chapters in that to come. if you guys see an error please let me know I will fix it as soon as possible
5 years ago
1
BeautifulAssasin
ooooo I read that the author is going to make this yuri. I cannot wait to see some girl on girl action this going to be amazing. the book I am loving how it progressing. It is one of the best video game novel I have read thus far
5 years ago
1
L0c4tr0n4s3xy
I can see that Bai Li is going to be the FL wifey. they would be so adorable together I cannot wait to see if there is going to be romance between the two of them
5 years ago
1
webociben
I am liking this story. it is the first light novel that i have read of this kind. i cant wait to read more chapter of this amazing author. i hope that she keep up the good work .
5 years ago
1
LobitaLocaSexy
I wonder what will happen next. this novel is keeping me intrigue. I wonder if there is going to be romance in this novel. I am hoping for some yuri action on this novel
5 years ago
1
Drangolovo
I am loving this story so far it is a 5out 5 the author should keep doing a great job.I cannot wait to see this light novel reach 100s of chapters
5 years ago
1
llDarkCloudsll
This novel is amazing. I am loving it. it one of the most unique novel I have seen. I hope for the author to keep doing a good job and not drop this light novel. let get it author-san. I want to see more chapters. I recommend this light novel.
This is one of the best story have read so far keep up the good work. i hope to see more chapters. it is amazing i recommend it for people to read it. i like how detail the book is so far
booom ya love this story. I am the number ten to rate this what sup people. I recommend for ya to read this novel it is amazing ya will love it
Story jumps from plot to plot and has very little build up of events or world. Grammar is good and I never fault a writer for updates, unless they make promises they don't keep.
Keep up the good work bella. I am liking this story. I started reading yesterday I can't wait to read more about this amazing story. As for the haters that you have I have 2 words for them Suck it
opppa. this is what I call an op FL. she kick ass. I am loving the face that it aint starting off slow. the amount of chapter being release is amazing as well keep up the good work
From the beginning to the ending this book is filled with chaos. Plot: Very bad. Jumping from one style to another, no links between chapters, the only interest that i had “is the next chapter weirder?”. No description of world, characters. Tons of unnecessary text, a lot of holes in plot and, of course, the worst setting i have ever seen.
Reveal Spoiler
Shameless author here. I hope that everyone is enjoying my light novel I will be posting more chapters in that to come. if you guys see an error please let me know I will fix it as soon as possible
ooooo I read that the author is going to make this yuri. I cannot wait to see some girl on girl action this going to be amazing. the book I am loving how it progressing. It is one of the best video game novel I have read thus far
I can see that Bai Li is going to be the FL wifey. they would be so adorable together I cannot wait to see if there is going to be romance between the two of them
I am liking this story. it is the first light novel that i have read of this kind. i cant wait to read more chapter of this amazing author. i hope that she keep up the good work .
I wonder what will happen next. this novel is keeping me intrigue. I wonder if there is going to be romance in this novel. I am hoping for some yuri action on this novel
I am loving this story so far it is a 5out 5 the author should keep doing a great job.I cannot wait to see this light novel reach 100s of chapters
This novel is amazing. I am loving it. it one of the most unique novel I have seen. I hope for the author to keep doing a good job and not drop this light novel. let get it author-san. I want to see more chapters. I recommend this light novel.
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