The Mundane Life of an Office Worker

I am liking this so far. I wanna know what she is gonna do if they stepped to her. Back up? Or fight like a cornered cat? I am rooting for you hun. Your writing is preddi_kool 😂 see what I did there?

The writing is smooth and the main character has some pretty interesting quirks. The setting is ...mundane, just as advertised. It seems interesting and down to earth. Though the main plot hasn't started up yet it will be better if we know what exactly is this novel about. Is it just a slice of life, about the life of the mc or will there be other elements in it too.

Promising... Grammar has minor hiccups, nothing another once over won't fix. Prose and dialogue felt natural, and I appreciate a fellow writer using a mundane setting to tell an interesting story. Keep on writing👍

Good start!! The story flow is smooth so far. I would like to see more chapters in the future from the author. Minimal errors!!Good work author!! Happy writing!!

I have read all the 3 chapters that have been published so far. Interesting story. 'writing quality is good, stability of updates will be there as the chapters add on, The story is in the nascent stage as yet and developing nicely. There are very few characters and the main character is described well. The world background is well defined. All the best.

Quite the exhilarating story with interesting characters. It's nice to see the Jamaican perspective of being saddled in the bosom of capitalism as a bit of a recluse. It could use a bit more emotive language though. Especially when showing the mental anguish, shame, disgust or just general chagrin of the main character being placed in situations diametrically opposed to her personality. Lovely piece. I look forward to reading the rest.