Supreme Commander: Star Wars The first Jump

I like it so far. Did you ever hear the tragedy of Darth Plagueis The Wise? I thought not. It’s not a story the Jedi would tell you. It’s a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life… He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful… the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. Ironic. He could save others from death, but not himself.

I started reading this because I love star wars in general. I'll keep reading this because I love this story and the way it's told. Keep up the great work! :)

Ah, a good fanfic about one of my most favorite games. Supreme Commander and Star Wars, nice match up if I say so myself. If the MC was from the UEF or the Seraphim, I would be a little bit hesitant to read but nonetheless read it but alas, he is from Cybran which made it all the more better! More chapters, please.

This book keeps getting better and better I can’t wait till the next chapter comes out so please write the next chapter soon and thank you🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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love the ideal of star wars and supreme commander cant wait for more! "I am the Bone of my Sword Steel is my Body and Fire is my Blood. I have created over a Thousand Blades, Unknown to Death, Nor known to Life. Have withstood Pain to create many Weapons Yet those Hands will never hold Anything. So, as I Pray-- Unlimited Blade Works"

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A competent mc and a fun read update soon im enjoying this.....................................................................................

very intresting history but whit bery little stability on the updates it a lot of potential but dependens on how he solve the tech problem without cliche

I love the story overall and with the fact I also love the game there's no room for me to hate it. I also love star wars, so I hope this doesn't end any time soon.

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Would you accept a a Loki/Arrowverse challenge, A Game of thrones challenge, A Star Wars Challenge, Naruto/ Avatar Last airbender challenge, A Harry Potter challenge, a 100 Fanfiction Challenge A Percy Jackson challenge?

Kind of a bad start but it picks up and I can't wait to see where it goes. :) Sorry but I need like 200 characters so I'm just going to waffle for a bit

Great story and can't wait to read more of it. Keep up the good work the story and the way you mix the lore and the story of both together works very well. Don't let and nay sayers bother your motivation to write this book. Also will you eventually include your own units or only ones from supreme commander series?