Stardust: The First Champion
Author: Angelie_Roman
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Superhumans, Aliens, and Magic. Not an uncommon sight to Darren Kershaw. They're necessary for the protection of mankind from dangerous creatures and other superbeings who use their powers to do harm to civilians.
During a fight between a Super and Prowler, Darren is struck by lightning in an act of heroism to save a child. He falls into a coma.
He wakes up after several months only to discover that his body has gone through a transformation that will change his life forever. Is this change for the better or for worse?
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Really not bad however many improvements can be made and this novel can be fleshed out. Quality of writing is normal, nothing really stands out good or bad. Actually accurate English finally thank god. Story progresses too fast in the beginning. The dialogue kinda sounds weird and what they say would usually not be said in a real conversation. Author jumps really quick in certain times and it's like "Isn't this too early to be happening in the story?" Can be worked on but still readable. I love what you've done with the characters and you have really fleshed them out. It's easy to visualize the characters and their attitudes and behaviour. 👍🏻 The effort put in by the author in character designing is noticeable. World background is good. Idea of a superhero world is really overrated these days like Marvel. However, I want to see how the story and world unfolds because there seems to be more politics, drama and a bunch of stuff at play here. Overall, not bad. Could be better after author fixes dialogue. Very interesting characters and plotline.
I really like this story, it's well written and has a lot of potential. Other then one or two plot points that that I didn't like (but that's just due to me own personal taste) this story could have the potential to even be published someday. Though I wish the chapters could come out faster I know how much time and effort it takes to create a story like this, so I will just await the next chapter while cultivating my dao of patience.