The Uchiha-Senju Immortal

Hello guys... I'm an author of webnovel I'm writing a novel And this is my work👇 'I deserved better...' I said. Kindly read my work I hope you'll enjoy my work.

This has high potential and loving the release schedule hope you dont drop Thanks author ................................... ................. ................. ................. .................

Just another power trip fantasy..... MC has both Senju and Uchiha blood (that's fine imo). But he also has a body made of nature energy (like Juubi's), then he unlocks sharingan the 1st time he unlocks his chakra, then he is able to use wood style, lava style and space-time jutsus before he is even 5 years old. Then he tells to Senju leaders that he has a sage body, Hashirama is born with a sage body, and the ones with sage body can use wood style, and they simply accept it as facts without even wondering how a 4 year old kid knows this stuff. Disappointing to see shit like this rated 4.8*. Smh

To Author :-) I like it, thanks for This fanfic (but i might Say novel because creator of naruto Only own original version of it, but you create Another timeline but it is Just my opinion) i hope you don't abandon it, keep Up the good work. Below is ton of Reading but i think This can help you I hope you Will Read it ========================================== There i might give u some help in ying yang and futher development of the story: -IMPORTANT you can do something like This where he Will combine bloodlines in him, you can add hyuga, nara itp. why? Because he was interested in DNA So This Will make it futher develop it plus he can get more op, though he can made Shadow from his yin + wind/space BUT you can add more clans your creations because i dont think we know all clans because of Wars most of them can go instinct So you know This Will help you develop story with DNA (you can create clan whose bloodline is to manipulate light or dark(not Shadows) with light you can create illusion(bcs it Will affect light So Kai Will wont work on it) and dark you can use it for become more undetectable, but you can also use it to affect mi d like dark+yin=yamanaka=those who can enter someone mind (i dont know if name is right) -you can use yin to develop his soul, yang to develop his body or you can use yang for healing - you can add spiritual sense like cultivator have but he Will use yin energy - here i want you to develop seal fight, like when he hit his oponent he wilk aply np gravity seal, but it can be undo like tenketsu point (why? Because i Only See 1 fanfic/novel developing This style but it is good i think) -if he Will be blacksmith, you can add seals to the Weapons So it Will be more op i think thanks to something like that There are This legendarny Weapons (my opiniom) -you can add a plot where otsutsuki want kill his loved ones So he want revenge(=killing entire clan) (why want bcs i think Readers and i dont want his loved ones Die, Thought if you want to make him immortal you can bcs Old age, but if you Will make This plot futher after naruto is Born you can make nine tailed beast become his lover bcs "after he once lost his loved ones he dont want to futher See them Die" , and because kitsune is immortal they can be together) ++++++++This is Only my help to you bcs i dont want Another good story get abandoned... ++++++++++++ Though i can give more i want to See what Will you create, but please think about giving him some mythical pet like idk yin (spiritual) fox, but you dont need to create more of them you can do it bcs Mc Will affect This pet

Lol rewriting my review. I NEED MORE CHAPTER!!!!!☺️tiny mistakes here and there but overall it's AMAZING and has my seal of approval👍. More! More! More!: extra encouragement to post as fast as possible.

Love the story pls don’t drop!! One of the best naruto ideas I have read so far!🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🥳🤩👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁

the isnt bad, it is just overrated, the novel is very unrealistic, like no one questions how a 5 year old is very powerful. He also has kenkai like its just simple affinties that wasnt even explained.

What if the Naruto world was a secret Xianxia world? That pretty much sums it up. Lots of weird logic and forced plot over here but otherwise not bad. Personally tired of reading Chinese MCs, so, no for me. Writing quality is pretty good and updates are good and the world background is actually nice.

We demand more chapters. Really everything is too good for ddescribe so author please release more chapters story is really interesting..........

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Looking forward to future chapters. I hope you don't drop this novel. I really like this story. I am looking forward to how your story will progress and how you will approach other known key points of the naruto verse.

love the book, want to see more. hurry up and update plz plz plz👏👏👏.

PLS UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOODGOOD BUT HE NEEDS TO UPDATE THIS DANG STORY, PLEASE UPDATE IT GOOD GOODGOOD