Li Qiye in Marvel

This is a sort of self-critique and praise review. 1. This fanfic is hard to believe for those who don't know the true capabilities of Li Qiye. That's why I already advised before, if you haven't read Emperor's domination then go, read it. 2. Marvel characters are a little too submissive. For that, I can only say what the author of ED himself wrote "Li Qiye seemingly had a natural dominating affinity over other living beings. His words must be obeyed even though he didn’t exert an imperious aura right now." You can google the statement. 3. Even if you know nothing of Li Qiye, then just read believing that Li Qiye can do anything, like anything. For example, he has made girls fall for him just by staring in their eyes, he has defeated high gods without even moving a muscle.

I am hoping this is a good story... 😁 I am a fan of Li Qiye / Dark Crow and his OPness. His Dao Heart makes him so OP and an Immortal Emperor that no one can change. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

So after 6 chapters of cringe dialogue and narration (and one fake spam chapter), the premise finally begins at chapter 8, where it becomes extremely clear that the author does not understand neither the Marvel characters nor Li Qiye very well at all. None of them speak or act anywhere near canonically or realistically, and the interactions and narration throughout it all is heavily influenced by an extremely childish and poorly thought out anime/light novel style of writing. Basically just another case of a writer being so caught up in the world of anime that they don't know how to turn it off. I don't doubt that you put a bit of work into the story, but it's honestly just not good. You chose Emperor's Domination and Marvel as your crossovers and then wrote it in a style completely unlike them both. Oh, and the only reason Shinpachi sort-of worked in Gintama was because the writers were actually funny and used him as a straight-man gag to the otherwise amusing acts of the cast. Your OC is not only nothing like Shinpachi (as you claim), your cast is generally just not funny at all, so all he becomes is an awkward, out-of-place character that the readers will heavily dislike. Know your strengths and weaknesses, and your strength is certainly not above-age-10 humor.

it start off good...but like any trash novel booommm!!it goes downnn.....i mean thats not how li qiye would really react when he sees a beautiful woman.he's really fuckin old i mean natasha is really hot but c'mon.....and where did his first battle maid go?? c'mon men...youre making the original novel look trash...like some random comment has said...watch your neck at night...and you're not even funny

Your death will be honoured to be brought upon you by the hands of Li Qiye. His is the epitome of OPness. No-one was like him, nor will ever be able to become like him.

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Any self respecting marvel fan would want to murder you in your sleep author. You better watch your neck carefully at night. Who knows...you might open your eyes in bed one night to find someone looming over your lying form with a hand out stretched and a silver sheen. The point is, you gotta show fandoms a certain amount of respect. Especially if you’re making a fan based novel about it.

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Seems fun but please don't do bulls*it where the mc accepts stupid commands and tolerates bulsshit from the earth and its avengers. He is basically a god and he should do whatever he wants! I've seen to many crap where powerful mc accepts stupid commands from the main cast, because author doesn't know what to do with himself and can't bother killing any canon characters, no matter how annoying they are.

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