Jago - Prince of Darkness
Welcome to my first attempt on writing an English novel, Jago - Prince of Darkness.
Please bear with me and accept my apologies for my bad English since it was not my mother language, but I’ll try my best.
Jago - Prince of Darkness
A fantasy story about an imaginary world called Five Element Continent.
A world filled with magic and fighting.
A world where mage and warrior were living and growing up.
A world where a different kind of mage were striving to be the strongest.
Mage of this continent was different than others typical mage.
They were not like a typical wizard who fought by waving their wand and chanting spells like in Harry Potter’s world.
They were not a long ranged combatant who required protection of their colleagues while preparing a complicated rune prior to unleashing their spell.
They were not a freak who wearing a pointy hat and stirring their weird potions.
Mage of this world were cultivating element energies instead of mana.
They manipulated the five element of natures (Wood, Fire, Earth, Metal and Water) to fight.
They fought each other in close combat instead of long range one.
Follow the journey of the MC growing up from the weakest to become the strongest on the continent.
I just read all the book today, it was very good. The worldbuilding and the characters are the ones that I like the most. It's a promising premise and I am really expectant.
I have speed read the first few pages of chapter one, not bad at all, will continue later after I am done with the others. Good work writer please continue.
Seem to be a pretty good book in the making, read the first chapter and going to continue reading once I am done with the rest of my books. 😊
This book has some promise. The need for editing is on another spectrum. Tenses out of place, verbs missed used; it’s hard to enjoy few chapters that don’t go into unnecessary details that are drawn out. If your not fluent in English please do not use this as any standard for how writing or language is. I really hope the next chapters are better and more planned out.