The MetaCraft Dungeon System
"Cool Prank, Bruh."
*Thud*
"Sis!?"
Naomi Riley Maddison died on the night of her sweet Sixteen following a 'prank' executed by her idiot older brother. He had placed a ROOFIE in her Cherry Bomb drink to teach her never to put down her drink at a party, which ended up triggering a heart attack and killing her on the spot!
As a devout Atheist, she finds herself pulled from the darkness that was death, and placed in front of a being proclaiming to be God! Not only that, they're declaring to be her best friend to boot! What!? Instead of letting her soul rest in peace, he sentences her to a Fantasy World with a System that's forcing her to fight against Dungeon invading Adventurers much to her annoyance!
Without any further information, she returns to the Nether, eternal darkness ensues!
[ PING! Hostess Subconscious Detected. . . Uploading MetaCraft . . . Upload complete! ]
[ PING! Adjusting Interface and Personality Subroutines. . . Adjustments Complete! ]
[ PING! Self-Activating. . . ! ! ! ERROR ! ! ! ]
[ PING! Alrighty then! Waking the Hostess! ]
< Shamelessly slapping five stars on my own product. > < Hope you don't mind. > < Leave me some good grub.. I mean yeah... Food would do! > < But really, leave me something constructive! >
Writing Quality improves relatively quickly and becomes more expressive. Update stability is outstanding, two chapters a day so far. Story development is stable, a bit fast paced, but nominal. Character design, descriptions could need a bit more sprucing, even though it wasn't until recently anyone more was introduced, but overall they're good. The system has a distinct personality and is highly interactive, and world background hasn't really been shared just yet. Hoping for more!
it was a great story and a equally great mc but it stopped to short I wish their was more chapters.
great story really want to read more of it.