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Madara and his mother returned home for lunch, suddenly the figure jumped into Madara's arms, she was Ling Shuirou, Madara's twin sister. With a frown, Shuirou pinched Madara's arm and began to scold him
Shuirou - Chen ge, why you go to play without invite me again, didn't you promise to me always play with me before?
Shuirou is currently the same age as Madara, who is four years old. Shuirou had smooth black hair like silk, beautiful with charming black eyes and a face that was cute like a doll. You can imagine when she grows up, his beauty can destroy the country.
Madara - Rou'er, wouldn't you be able to play with other kids besides me, if you were like this you wouldn't have friends
Madara told Suirou to play with other kids in the village.
Shuirou - Humm ... You have no right to advise me, I have never seen you play with other someone in village and you told me to play with other kids?
hearing shuirou taunt , the corner of Madara's eyes twitched at the ridicule of his sister. The reason why Madara doesn't want to play with children is because basically Madara's age is very old, so Madara feels strange if he has to play with other kids in his village.
Shuirou - Besides, playing other kids isn't fun because they cry easily with a little bluff, and also I have you, so I won't be lonely. But instead you play alone without inviting me again
Hearing Shuirou's words, Madara felt a little guilty because he often left his sister to practice alone. Seeing her sister's fake tears Madara smiled a little and decided to invite her sister to training together.
Madara - I'm sorry Rou'er, next time I will invite you to training together, Okey. If your face keeps pouting you will get old fast
Hearing his brother's words, a sweet smile appeared on Shuirou's face
Shuirou - Really !!! ... Really !!?? ... you better not lie or I'll never talk to you again
Hearing Shuirou's threat, a smile appeared on his handsome and cute face, many adult women on the road were fascinated by his smile and wanted to hug him.
Su Ling'er - Alright, let's go home quickly and have lunch or your body will get sick if you don't eat on time
Seeing the funny behavior of his two children, a smile appeared on his face, but when he saw many other mothers around him who saw their two children like seeing gold, he hurriedly took his child home.
"Okey Mum" Shuirou and Madara said at the same time.
After arriving at his home, Madara saw his cousin was cleaning his yard. Seeing this, Shuirou called Yixue and immediately held his hand.
Yixue is now 10 years old, with brownish black hair and a goddess face. Yixue has a lot of fans even though she is still very young, you can imagine her beauty like in the future.
Even so, until now Yixue has never hung out with children her age, her only playmates are Madara and Shuirou
Shuirou - Xue Jie !!!
Shuirou ran to Yixue and immediately hugged him
Yixue - What's up with you Rou'er? there are tears on your face, is Chen'er bluffing you?
After saying that Yixue immediately looked at Madara with a cold gaze and made Madara a little chill on his back, if there was someone who was feared by Madara all his life, then there was Yixue.
If people in previous lives knew that the Uchiha Madara, someone who had been a disaster during the fourth world war that even made Naruto and Sasuke pressed, was afraid of a 10-year-old little girl, what kind of expression people would make.
In recent years, Madara will be taken care of by Yixue when her mother goes to do her work because she is taking care of the village treasury. If Madara refused to eat or bathe, Yixue would stare at him with a cold stare that made Madara who at that time had an immature mental traumatized so that he had to swallow shame because he had to be fed and bathed by a little girl.
That's what makes Yixue a person that Madara is afraid of, but if Madara doesn't make a problem and becomes an obedient child then Yixue spoil Madara like he spoiled Shuirou.
Yixue - Chen'er, did you bully your sister ane make Rou'er cried?
Hearing Yixue's question, cold sweat appeared on Madara's back, when Madara wanted to answer his question, suddenly Suirou interrupted him.
Shuirou - Please don't blame Chen Ge, I cried because my eyes was hit by dust while playing around the village
Yixue then looked at Shuirou with a gentle smile that was more than 180 degrees from before.
Yixue - Is what you say really Shuirou? A good child does not lie or his nose will elongate and become ugly
Shuirou - I'm telling the truth Xue jiejie
Yixue - Okay, then, but your brother must be punished for not accompanying you while playing, which will cause your eyes to dust
Hearing that, the corner of Madara's mouth twitched but didn't dare to refute it and just nodded
Seeing the antics of her two children and niece, Su Ling'er just smiled and shook her head when see that her son was so obedient to his cousin.
Alright, Yixue stop teasing Chen'er and go in, time for lunch
Yixue - Auntie, uncle gave a message that he will not be home for a few weeks, because there is an important business to do outside of diesa
Hearing this, Su Ling'er sighed knowing that her husband was currently carrying out a mission related to the blue wind empire, looking towards the village gate, Su Ling'er prayed that her husband would return home safely.
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The next day Madara went to his hidden training ground in the back hill of the village with his sister to practice, when his sister knew that he would train and become stronger, she became very happy and immediately jumped to hug Madara.
Out of curiosity Madara then asked why her became very happy when she would become stronger, Shuirou said if she became stronger then she could bully people who were much bigger and stronger than her, hearing that Madara could only silently look at the mischief his sister was doing.
Madara - Alright Rou'er, first you have to meditate and start to feel the natural energy around you, I will help you so you can feel younger about that energy.
Shuirou - Will it take long? Because I want to become stronger as soon as possible
Madara - This depends on how well you understand natural energy. If your understanding is bad, I'm afraid you cannot understand this energy and can only wait when you are six years old to be able to cultivate by absorbing yuan energy.
Hearing this, Shuirou's face was filled with determination to be stronger so she could bully more people around her.
Seeing the look on his sister's face, a tupis smile appeared on Madara's face without knowing the purpose of the look that appeared on his sister's face.
Madara - Alright, sit on the ground in a meditating position, relax your body and clear your mind, I will channel the nature energy in your body and you must understand that energy as soon as possible
After Shuirou entered the meditation state, Madara began to place his palm on Shuirou's back and began to channel natural energy into his body.
Madara - feel the nature energy entering your body and understand the nature of that energy, natural energy is very gentle energy and does not conflict with any energy. Nature energy is also the foundation of life.
After several hours, Shuirou's body began to be enveloped in natural energy. With Madara's natural energy as a catalyst, Shuirou was able to understand natural energy very quickly. If you do not use Madara's Natural Energy as a catalyst, it is not possible for Shuirou or others to understand natural energy because natural energy is not something learned or discovered, but luck.
The reason why Madara can understand natural energy is because in the previous world Madara had absorbed the god tree or the Shinju tree to become stronger, so that Madara could easily absorb the natural energy in this world.
Slowly, the nature energy that enveloped Shuirou began to disappear and very smelly black dirt began to appear on the surface of her skin, but Madara did not try to clean it because it would interfere with the process of combining nature energy with his body.
After a few minutes Shuirou finally came out of his meditation, Shuirou screamed after seeing his body was filled with a very smelly black dirt. Madara explained that was dirt that had accumulated in his body after several years.
With a face full of anger, Shuirou went to the river accompanied by Madara to cleanse his body. The location of the river is near the forbidden forest, because the river is on the edge of the forbidden forest, Shuirou thinks there will be no problem if going to the place to take a shower for a while.
Madara - We better stay away from that place, did you forget what mom warned you? You can go back to the village anyway and take a bath at home
Shuirou - Chen ge, Have you always been a coward like this? We will only go to the edge of the forest, there will be no danger there
Madara was not provoked by the provocation of Shuirou and continued to forbid Shuirou to go there.
Shuirou - Do I have to go home with a body full of dirt like this? I will be laughed at by people in the village,
Madara - I don't care, if you insist on going there, I will use force and drag your body back to the village
Hearing Madara's threat, Shuirou's eyes began to water, seeing that fear filled Madara's heart because he must have been scolded by his sister Yixue.
Madara - Stop crying, I'll accompany you to take a bath there, but you have to hurry because even if it's on the edge, it's still a dangerous zone
Hearing Madara's words, Shuirou's face began to fill with a triumphant smile. "Hahahah ... brother will definitely obey all my wishes if I will cry, surely because Chen ge is afraid of Xue Jiejie will scold him" Shuirou thought in his heart
"I want to know what kind of danger is in the forest, if the monster appears, I just need to run away" Shuirou thought in his mind and underestimated the danger of the forbidden forest
This is what is meant by 'Newborn calves are not afraid of tigers' or 'curiosity can kill cats'
Madara and Shuirou walked towards the river close to the forbidden forest. Along the way, Madara saw many signs of no entry or warning of dangerous areas, after a few minutes walking they finally arrived there.
Shuirou - Look brother, as I said there are no monsters in this river, brother wait here for a moment, I will wash my body and clothes
Analyzing his surroundings using the Sharingan, Madara didn't find the presence of monsters around them, but somehow Madara felt a dangerous feeling in his heart. After 10 minutes Waiting Shuirou, Madara become impatient.
Madara - Shuirou, you better hurry up and clean yourself, I feel something strange around here
Shuirou - Alright, I'll finish cleaning my clothes and body, just wait for me
After a while Shuirou finally finished cleaning herself, Madara helped dry her clothes by using the hot temperature in his palm, with perfect control of his energy, Madara could dry Shuirou's shirt without damaging it.
After finishing wearing his clothes, Shuirou and Madara rushed to go home because his mother would definitely worry about him, suddenly a tremor emerged from the ground and a monster figure appeared before them.
"Bull Frog !!" Madara and Shuirou said
Bull Frog is a 3 meter monster that is in the first layer Profound Realm, this monster lives in groups led by Bull Frog who are usually in the Prufound realm layer 3. They are monsters that live in areas near the river while waiting for prey like cows to drink water in the river and eat it.
Bull Frog has a fairly agile movement for its size and has a hard skin on its back, they use their tongues to wrap around their prey and eat it alive
Madara - I finally understood why I felt danger around me but could not find a monster around me despite using the Sharingan, it turned out that the monster was in the ground
Shuirou - Chen ge, come back quickly or they will eat us
Shuirou's face began to fill with fear when she saw the Bull Frog in front of him
Boomm ...
The lands around them began to crack and more than 10 Bull Frogs appeared and began to surround them. Seeing that, Madara immediately embraced Shuirou and tried to escape, but Madara's movements were a little slower because he was carrying Shuirou which caused one of the Bull Frog to wrap around Madara's legs with his tongue
Madara - Damn, my body isn't fast enough to avoid the disgusting monster's tongue
Madara quickly threw Shuirou into the bush to get out of the reach of the Bull Frog and told him to run away.
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Hahaha finally the long-awaited scene appears, if there is a writing error in this chapter dont hesitate to tell it. That way I can fix it so that other readers can read comfortably and easily
It's a little funny to see someone like Madara who is feared by almost everyone in his previous life afraid of little girls .... Hahahha I laughed nonstop while writing that part