Fang mo was an unparalleled genius who was about to be recruited to the highest grade sect, the golden divinity sect, although as he knew it, just as he was about to achieve his dreams, but everything soon crumbled as the discovery of bone frames and martial spirits were found, cultivation changed for the better, many people who were considered weak became respectable people, all except fang mo, he was seen as trash by awakening a first grade yellow ranked spirit and a zero star bone frame, he cursed the gods for giving him this fate, after he was thrown into the mountains and to a cliff above the ravine on a stormy night, due to a chain of events, the cliff broke and he discovered a life changing secret that could help him change his fate and climb the ranks in this world, come along with fang mo as he changes his fate for the better!
I like the potential for growth in the story and character design, looking forward to see how the adventure unfolds. Hope he gets the chance to get stronger and stronger as explores the world in this new exciting time.
i really hope that you guys enjoy my story! if you have any tips please let me know! i'm always open to tips and tricks on how to write something. and i just wanna say that if you've read it, thank you so much! and please leave a review and some power stones so even more people can enjoy it!
It’s unique in its own way like the rating system or ranks that they have its pretty intuitive. Very captivating at the start, and i like the overall manner of how he uses the words to his advantage
the story is rather interesting, it has some ups and downs in the writing, but the character development and the mentioned release times, i look forward on the progression on the main character how how he turns out, also looking forward to see what he gets at the rebirth realm, hehehe
very good logan liked it all i hope there is more coming do you know if there is another book coming ? looking forwards to the new chapters sdfndfsdsfljdskljfksdljfklsdjfldskjfklsdjfdklsjfdslkfjdsklfjldsjfdslkfjsdljfkdskl
I really love how this isn't another one of those instant harem ones where the MC is just flooded by chicks, it's a nice break from all the real big novels on here, and I'm honestly surprised you haven't struck gold yet. Good luck t you and know that I'll still be reading!
it's really good for a novice writer, probably better then any of the stories i've had to write for school. keep working hard and one day you might be able to get 1mil views! although work on explaining the world and just up the writing styles quality a little bit more! BTW i love the first person
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Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!
Very good read for someone just starting out. The chapters are well thought out and the wording is great for a novice. Keep up the good work and keep this book going! Look forward to more from you!
Really fucking awesome. Can’t wait to see more development and more chapters! I’m really into the plot and think this book has a lot of potential.