Eden Virus
Author: JTaKeo
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It spoke to me a light; “My child, are you not tired of this sin filled world?”
“Come and embrace me. Accept me.”
It called to me; A Paradise. It granted to me; An Eternity. It brought to me; Salvation.
No pain. No fear. No evil. No sins. No deaths.
For this world is Eden. And it shall burn.
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This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hello this is Brandon Gould the writter of the Tylingariea Epic I am responding to a Review Swap I have just asked you about and here is my review Of the chapters that I have read so far I have enjoyed it. I can see that you are going for a P.O.V first person prespeve and that is good it will make the story more personal to the reader. but if you are to do that, i would give the world more despicans and detail so that we as the reader now where we are and what is happening around us. the writing is good but the pacing in my opinion was just a little fast and could have used some places to desired people like the scary student what makes him scary, is the MC in a school or a other place. But with that said the story itself is delvoping at a good enough speed that i can understand what is happening. these are just my suggestions but from what i have read so far i am sure that the book will be great