Throne of Steam
In this world of steam, the gods once needed people to exist, the continual belief of the masses was necessary for their very existence, the world used to be an utopia!
Not anymore!
In an age were machinery is slowly thriving, the gods found another way to continue living! But only one will be able to sit on the throne of steam, what will be the fate of mortals? Can a mortal also vie for the Throne?
Waking up amidst a fire, Garett discovered a side of the world that was hidden from ordinary people! Things like superpowers could be granted by different entities, and mysticism is only the tip of the iceberg!
Follow Garett as he finds himself in situations that no mortal man should, the different churches are mainly his foes - while he explores his newfound powers to develop in this steamy world!
This will become the rising or the downfall of a new star?
Hello everyone! I'm ToS writer, and honestly, I don't have much experience writing and would like to ask for your honest feedback! Please help me grow while we witness Garett's journey together!
From what I've read until this moment, it shows promise. A lot of it. I'm not really taking into consideration the "vagueness" of it all. It's more a question of pacing and story development than an issue with the story itself. Waiting eagerly for the next chapters.
While the world background is still foggy and the writing is sometimes difficult to read, it's a solid job! I hope for frequent updates and wish for the best. It always feels wonderful to help new, budding authors.
Overall, good ****. It’s interesting to see a fantasy story that takes place in a setting that isn’t an academy or a standard fantasy world. Magic system is unique and interesting.
As I read every chapter, I could notice, slowly but surely, at least something more subtle about the worldbuilding creeping in. This applies for the character development, too. Expect to read more.
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(Locked myself out of my other account. Please, bear with me.) Reading through it all again, I now noticed some tidbits about the worldbuilding that I hadn't seen before. All in all, a really solid and promising story.
I feel there is a good deal of promise here. I feel a real Lord of the Mysteries vibe from this work, which can, if the author uses it well, be a great background for a story. One criticism regarding writing technique is that the author continuously switches between first and third person from sentence to sentence. It's important to stick to one or the other. If a statement is an internal monologue or thought, it should be demarcated as such in some way, either with quotes or perhaps italics.
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