A story of a peasant boy on the southern outskirts of Marxis until his world gets turned upside down by discovering a power long forgotten as ancient evils return, hero's fall, and legends rise
Story is alright.
Improve your writing. Chapters were too short. If you're writing it RPG style, pls use ' I '.
But considering your first time, its good I guess. Its the best , I can point out for you considering , I too started a few days ago too.
And keep writing
5 years ago
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rebecca_ringdomsto
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Story is alright. Improve your writing. Chapters were too short. If you're writing it RPG style, pls use ' I '. But considering your first time, its good I guess. Its the best , I can point out for you considering , I too started a few days ago too. And keep writing
Hey Webnovelist! Good day for writing! If you want to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new works, you might want to email rebecca.review@outlook.com. We are mainly looking for adventure novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game). A brief introduction, along with a few samples or links, will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!