An Unattainable Magic

The story is greatly detailed in a way that helps you understand the story and makes you feel like you are living it yourself. You can easily see the great amount of effort the author invested in their work. I highly recommend to give this novel a chance!

This story renewed my bias in reading! It's a great read right off the bat! Not to mention how great the scenario depictions are^^😁 I, alongside others, will continue reading this ,that's without a doubt😉

The storytelling is just awesome. I can actually imagine whatever is conveyed through the story. I sincerely loved this story. It's magical.

A very good story. It reminds me of somehow Harry Potter but it's different. I'll continue to read your story with times and hope there will be new content soon! Keep going and especially enjoy yourself!

The story is greatly detailed! It's very descriptive and you can actually imagine yourself being in the world the author is writing about! It's a very immersive and wonderful read. If you're not put off by the lengthy descriptions then I really recommend this! I'll be anticipating the author's next chapters!

I have to admit I am a bit jelly about your ability for detail. Your storytelling is amazing. I completely could relate to the feelings of the main lead as you explained bit by bit her background story and the life in the current situation. I will continue to follow this story. Amazing <3

The story has a very interesting start, with the characters and the world they live in. The way you occasionally drop hints about how the world is like is absolutely amazing, and just wanting to learn about the world alone is enough for me to read more. Now, the characters are all interesting and have depth to them, and I'm curious on how they'll continue to act and grow as the story moves on. I honestly don't know who the FL will end up with, and each of the possible choices all have interesting motivations. Your descriptions are amazing, but I will say some sentences don't exactly read the best, and the long paragraphs is another nitpick of mine, but they're pretty minor all things considering. I look forward to seeing where you take this story.

Oh My God, you have some talent in story telling. I really wish I had ability like you. I tried editing my chapters so many times, I still could not really reach even 10% of your level. Dayum! It is very intriguing plot and I am really looking forward to who our FL will end up with, if there is such a thing! Your story telling gives the plot a touch of slice of life and right now, I am really envious of you. Keep up the great work!!

Very interesting beginning so far, a nice touch on wording and description. It draws you into the story and makes you want to read more. The characters as well are all unique making you want to learn more about them as well.

Amazing work, very detailed and astounding. Few people have this kind of talent early on. Waiting on the edge of my seat for much much more!!!