EXTRA N°2
Extras to better explain various things from the first volume. Skippable chapter. It is useful to find all the information of unpublished things in a single chapter, to facilitate the search for the readers (and for me u.u).
WARNINGS: It will be a very long chapter (a lot) and only information.
To understand how an extra is divided, read "EXTRA N ° 1".
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START DESCRIPTIONS.
PLACES:
1) Heterna (Ch 30-31).
Circular island become famous for the "Heterno" wood. Because of a monster who was always around the island, people started give up to trying to get that wood.
Initially, the island was poor and the inhabitants were dressed in rags, leaves or some animal fur, while the houses were small and made of wood.
The place took the name "Heterna" from the legend of the island. The protector God of the island was said to have come from a planet called Heterna. Failing to go back, he created the island in the likeness of his old planet.
This god had brought prosperity, but a sea monster had made all the people of the island disappear, including this God.
Heterna is also the name of Envy's home planet. On this planet, it was impossible to experience more than one emotion. Everything was decided by the birth of the newborn.
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OBJECTS:
1) Virtual Maps(Ch 23)
Small piece of metal created by Mysha. It was the metal of her island, and she had created it to be able to move without problems in the cities she knew.
Mysha had already developed maps for different areas, obviously based on her memories. New buildings are not present on the map.
The piece of metal had a small raised piece that once pressed caused the map inserted inside to float.
In addition to being a simple map of the place, it had other features, such as showing the position of the other "Virtual Maps", thus being able to trace the owners.
2) Asdrerd Pistol (Ch 29)
A silver pistol with black lines on the sides.
It has a small lever on the right side of the gun, which is used to activate a mechanism inside it. Once the lever is pressed, the liquid inserted in the door on the left of the gun will be inserted into the first bullet. The liquid was enough to fill three bullets. The liquid that Asdrerd uses to fill the bullets is its color.
It is light and perfect for medium distances.
Asdrerd cannot use this gun when dressing up as a Color Criminal.
The gun was only Asdrerd's weapon and had no name.
3) Heterno (Ch 33)
Wood that grows only on the island of Heterna. It is said to be a tree wood planted by a God.
Divine wood was considered a dream for any carpenter and pirate.
Disappeared from circulation for many years and considered by many to be a legend.
Although it was defined as a tree, it was more of a small silver-colored plant. It was easy to tear but extremely difficult to work with.
4) Lock Memory Helmet (Ch 33)
Metal helmet created by Mysha. It had the same material as the laboratory Mysha used as a home.
Helmet capable of blocking the escape of thoughts.
It was gray and with a bucket shape. It was not very beautiful aesthetically but because it was built in a hurry. Mysha was already working on improving its aesthetics and effects.
5) Wedding Dress (Ch 39)
Gorgeous white wedding dress. It did not show too much skin and was not transparent anywhere. Small emeralds were present in various parts of the dress. Dress bought by Mysha not to make a bad impression. Initially, she thought it was a normal dress.
However, she hopes to use it one day.
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CHARACTERS:
1) Color Criminal (Ch 25)
His identity is still unknown. It is believed to be a male because of the witnesses' voice, but it is not a sure thing.
His goal is to destroy the world government and it appears to have some connection with Asdrerd. The Color Criminal has a bounty of 700 Million Berry and the World Government has created a team to capture him.
The only thing known is that he has a power that can generate Golems with paint and transmit his words through them.
The Color Criminal was Asdrerd but apart from a few characters, nobody knew.
2) Loppy (Ch 26)
Member of the CP EX1.
She is a young girl, probably a minor.
Always wear a giant cat-shaped hat on her head. As a result, her hairstyle and hair color is unknown. She is thin and low. Her eyes are similar to those of a cat and are yellow.
In every sentence, she changes a word with "Nya", consequently when she has to say only one word she expresses herself only with "Nya!"
Under the eye, she had three colors to indicate her rank within the team. The colors were purple, azure and green.
— What she loves most: The Cats.
— What she hates most: Animal experiments.
— Motto: "Nya"
3) Rosa (Ch 26)
Member and deputy captain of the CP EX1. As a demonstration of her status, she has six rainbow colors under the eye. You can notice the absence of the blue color.
Rosa is an elderly woman with gray hair due to age. She seems to be very close to the captain of the CP EX1.
She had pink eyes and many wrinkles on her face. Rosa was not interested in taking care of her face. When she was young she spent whole days looking after her appearance.
— What she loves most: Her grandchildren.
— What she hates most: Stay away from her grandchildren.
— Motto: None
4) Carol (Ch 26)
An employee in the most famous weapons shops in Water 7.
Colleagues remember her as a kind, caring and always smiling girl.
She was a 17-year-old girl. She had a bob hairstyle and was thin. Her height was about 170 cm.
She was a skillful girl with guns and her bounty was 99 million Berry. Her job was only a cover to know when the navy came to the store.
Carol kidnapped children to disembowel them and recover their organs, then sell them on the black market. In addition to personal gain, she enjoyed comparing the newly torn organs.
After her death, they found her refuge full of corpses of children in a horrible state. In addition to the corpses, they found a young girl alive, who asked to kill her for the pain. The girl had not an eye, with blood still dripping from the cavity, and after careful checks on the girl, they also noticed the absence of a kidney.
It was probably a quick job before Carol going to her last day on the job. Probably Carol cared for the little girl to keep her alive so that she could extract other organs as fresh as possible.
The nickname given to Carol was "Carol the Bloody Organ". This name derives from photos found in her home. In all these photos, she had different organs in her hand.
— What she loves most: The screams of children when she removed the organs.
— What she hates most: When a child died before he could scream.
— Motto: "The cries of a child make the torn organ more brilliant! So scream as much as you can, my little bags of money!"
5) Larry (Ch 26)
The elder brother of Carol. He was also infiltrated the weapons shop, and he was skillful to use the stick.
Colleagues remember him as detached and cold, but they never thought he was such a person.
He was 190 cm tall, thin and handsome. Many wealthy women came on purpose just to see Larry. Usually, he worked on the second floor and the women often asked him to show them how to use the stick. Larry hated this behavior and didn't seem interested in these women at all.
Despite being the older brother, he obeyed his sister. This is because he believed that Carol's techniques were far superior to his.
When he tore the organs, he immediately killed the children, while his sister managed to tear them in the most painful way possible but without even making the victims lose consciousness. He and his father were surprised and frightened by Carol's talent.
He often abused children before passing them to Carol.
His bounty amounted to 66 million.
— What he loved most: Children. Seeing the mothers of the kidnapped children go buy weapons in their shop.
— What he hates most: The women who visited him at the shop.
— Motto: "A person, big or small, expresses all his beauty only in the most desperate moments.
6) Lunaska (Ch 26-27)
Member and captain of the CP EX1. She has the seven colors of the rainbow under the eye.
Lunaska is a young girl in her twenties. He had blue hair and sapphire eyes.
Not much is known about her past, but it seems that even the Five Elders trust her words.
She was considered the best detective in the world.
She is the first person to discover the identity of the Color Criminal on her own. Despite this, she said nothing and decided to collaborate with Asdrerd for the sake of her companions and her goal.
She needs money and everything seems to be tied to her sister.
Despite not having high intelligence, she could think of 100% of her abilities at all times.
— What she loved most: Money, her companions, and her sister.
— What she hates most: God, the World Government, and her family.
— Motto: "🅶🆁🅰🆂🅿🅴🅳!"
7) Number 6 (Ch 28-30)
Do I really have to describe it?
Piece of a sheet of paper. Each piece of that particular sheet is a living being. Number 6 is the small piece with the number 6 written on it. He is now a member of the crew and is masochistic and Tsundere. He manages to communicate with Asdrerd.
— What he loved most: Being insulted and crushed.
— What he hates most: Humans.
— Motto: "I don't feel pleasure when you insult me! If you don't believe it, try it! Insult me as much as possible and you will see that I will not feel any pleasure. In case I am right, you will have to crush me. Okay?"
8) Xott (Ch 32)
Sea monster able to make every living creature that hits with his attacks disappear.
His normal appearance is similar to Final Fantasy X's Sin.
He has not always been with that shape. Before he was a small creature, a little fish. Eating memories and emotions makes him bigger and smarter.
He gave at Envy different emotions.
He always regrets his body. Xott wished to be close to Envy and be able to heal her when she was about to die. After seeing Envy die, he went mad and made all the inhabitants of the island Heterna disappear and protected the beach where he met Envy.
Xott had a practically indestructible defense. Not even a Buster Call managed to scratch him.
Member of Asdrerd's crew.
— What he loved most: Envy.
— What he hates most: His body.
— Motto: Nobody for now.
9) Envy (Ch 34)
A girl born in the world of Heterna. Having managed to escape, she somehow ended up in the world of One Piece on a poor island.
Initially, she was envious of everything, especially towards other feelings.
After meeting Xott, she managed to understand the feelings. Envy began to help the island and planted the "Heterno" saplings, giving the island great wealth.
After understanding more and more feelings, she fell in love with Peter and married him. Shortly thereafter his first child, Greppo, was born.
After discovering that her husband had poisoned her, she smiled and understood why Heterna was forbidden to have more feelings. Before she died, she understood that the only one who always supported and helped her was Xott.
— What she loved most: The emotions, Xott, and her son Greppo.
— What she hates most: The emotions.
— Motto: "I gained all the emotions but I lost one. Even now that I'm dying, I cannot feel envy."
10) Peter (Ch 34-35)
The most handsome man on the island of Heterna. He was tall and muscular, with short disheveled black hair. The eyes were brown, and he had a mature and responsible appearance. He was good at hunting and fishing. In addition to being very handsome, he was also very kind and protective.
Envy's husband and Greppo's father. He loved his son and Envy, as thanks to them, Peter could have become very rich.
— What he loved most: Money.
— What he hated most: Poverty.
— Motto: "With money, it is possible to have everything."
11) Greppo (Ch 30-34)
Son of Envy and Peter. He has always lived on the island of Heterna and the only memories of his parents derive from the memories that Xott gave him.
Consider Xott as a father figure who has looked after him since he was a child. Greppo is an old man with long white hair and a long beard. Having always lived alone, he looks wild. You can't see his eyes because of too thick eyebrows.
— What he loved most: The memories of his mother and father.
— What he hated most: The planet Heterna, for taking his parents away.
— Motto: "I am a free human! I piss when and where I want! I eat what I want!"
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SKILL
- New:
1) Explosion! (Ch 25)
He detonates his color. From this move, variants such as "Golem Explosion" were born. The more color it detonated the more pain Asdrerd would feel.
"Golem Explosion" was the simple explosion of the "Rainbow Golem". It was not an offensive skill at all, but Asdrerd used it for different situations.
2) Color Emotion (Ch 36)
It consists of giving emotional effects to colors. This power was born out of Asdrerd's beliefs. The paintings were a set of colors and were used to convey emotions. Asdrerd, for now, had given seven effects in seven different colors, those of the rainbow.
The ones he used are green and azure, which have a calming effect.
Asdrerd had attributed the serenity and tranquility of nature to the green color, and the sense of freedom and hope due to the sky to the azure color.
- Existing:
- Geppo
- Shigan
- Rankyaku
- Soru
- Observation Haki
- Armament Haki
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PAINTINGS:
1) Water 7 = 4 Billion (Ch 28)
Painting of the city of Water 7.
Spered created it during a tournament. It is the first painting he painted in public, showing his identity. This is why its value has skyrocketed.
2) Xott/ Sin? = 101 million (Ch 31)
A quick sketch to represent Xott via Mysha's description. Painting very faithful to the monster's aesthetics. Portrait unknown to the world, but the drawing of a creature is always appreciated. According to Asdrerd, Xott was identical to Final Fantasy X's Sin.
3) Heterna = 92 Million (Ch 33)
Portrait of the island Heterna. Made during the fight with Xott, for this, you may notice some imperfections. It was the representation of an island with pure white wooden houses and a villa that shone every time Xott threw his sphere, but with no human or animal present on the island. Peace ruled and plants were the masters of the place. No one else was allowed to set foot on the island.
4) The beach where it all started = 17 million. (Ch 37)
Important painting only for Xott, in memory of his first encounter with Envy. Asdrerd painted it only to convince him to follow them. The painting depicts the beach of Eternal Island.
5) Friendship that surpasses death = 782 Million / ∞ (Ch 38)
Painting with two different values.
782 Million Was the value that Asdrerd had given to the painting. It was a good drawing, nothing to say. A picture also conveyed a nice message. "A bond cannot be cut even after death". However, it was simply the portrait of a woman with a robot nearby and butterflies resting on them. One could say that the whole value was derived from the place, without Imu the value would have been X Billion Berry.
However, the presence of Imu has also made to Asdrerd possible to create an important contact and receive a noble title, which is impossible to buy with money.
He was willing to become King by recommendation. Of course, he suffered to ruin the painting with Imu's presence, but he gritted his teeth and thought about his future reign. Consequently, the value of this painting was Impossible to decipher.
6) Marijoa = 5 Billion (Ch 38)
A beautiful Marijoa painting in its entire splendor. In the portrait, various Celestial Dragons could be seen walking through the city with their slaves. It was a faithful representation of the cruelty of the World Nobles. Of course, this painting was also not revealed to the public. It was part of Asdrerd's private collection.
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NEXT VOLUME INFO:
The third volume will be one of the longest in the whole history.
The author's thoughts will be many times empty; in others, I will thank or ask for your opinion on something.
Given the current period, I write when I can find the time, so I cannot promise you anything.
The rest I wrote below since I had to explain many things.
END DESCRIPTIONS.
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START OF THE AUTHOR'S THOUGHTS.
Thanks for being patient. I know the boring chapter, I apologize but it is my small defect. I love making Extras, as this ... it is a kind of disease for me.
I don't think I have forgotten anything, in case I will update in the future.
Some information has been omitted on purpose. Like for example, some characters will have a minimal purpose in the plot, such as the owner of the weapons shop.
"So Carol and Larry?" They will have a following in the future, even if not directly but their family.
While for the characters already explained in the Extra N°1 but who have received an update (Example Zark) I decided not to insert them, otherwise each extra chapter will always be longer.
In each volume something will happen to these characters, I cannot insert an ever-greater description at every extra. Maybe before the final volume, I will put everything in a juicy extra nice.
The whole story will have five volumes. For now, I have made two volumes.
Volume 1 and 2 were quite short. The 3 and 4 will be the longest in the series, while the 5 the shortest.
I have not been able to appreciate Volume 2 as much as the first one; I hope to do better with the 3.
Writing the first volume was nice and I like to reread my work...
Less for the second volume.
I apologize if there has been dense content in this extra.
Volume 3 will start with chapters without our protagonists. Or rather, it will be present in two / three chapters but not as a protagonist. I have to move other characters.
In volume three, there will also be a small flashback about Yarold's life.
This volume will end with Marineford.
I hope you enjoyed my mediocre work for now.
As always, thank you for your comments, corrections, your opinions, and the reviews. I always appreciate any form of discussion. Discovering the different tastes of people is interesting.
I also thank for the stones and those they added to the library.
Finally, even to those who have simply read my work, after all, you have wasted your time on this story.
At the writing of this chapter:
- 222k views
- 7 reviews
- 564 collections
- 120 stones
A big thank you to everyone.
Now let's start with the corrections! From ch.1 to this extra.
See you at volume 3.
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[EXTRA EXTRA]
To unplug and not to be bored with writing I would like to write another fiction. This is because writing and reading the same thing over and over again may bore me, which could lead to dropping.
I don't want this to happen, so I want to write something different, always continuing this story.
I will not publish anything for now because I am thinking well about the story and the characters, so it is not something that I will start immediately. As for the original story, I still don't feel up to it.
This is the basic plot but it is just an idea. It is not even said that I write about this, as said before I want to think about it.
[An orphan boy grew up in an orphanage run by nuns in a world called X (I have yet to decide, it's not Earth but a Fantasy world, I just have to think of a name.)
For certain events that traumatized him, he stopped believing in the entity called God, even feeling hatred for it.
After his death, he reincarnates in the world of Danmachi, where he is forced to live with a divinity.]
Tag:
System (System that forces him to live with a divinity)
Weak to Strong
Evil Protagonist
Danmachi
Reincarnation
Cold Protagonist
Action
Underestimated Protagonist
Sorry for warning you about this project. I will probably start next year in my free time.
Bye!