The Rise of TheFALLEN GOD
The start is a bit mumbo-jumbo so yeah the later chapters like 10-39 are better (I think).I just created a discord sever and account please join if you want, https://discord.gg/Vuza563 ,it’s called The riseOf TheFallen God.The mc is a fat ass that barley works all he does is read novels watch anime and play games but one day a man came up to him and said please take these cables I’ll give ya 6m yen the mc agreed and the man did give him 6m yen and ran off so our mc decided to take them home he played games all night but that man followed him him e and.....gotta read for more this is a lot different than the main plot but this explains things that happens before he entered Edengale aka meaning Edan means the birth of all and gale is the creator's name.
I just edited 3-2 random chapters (forgot which ones they were) but that doesn’t matter tomorrow is going to be where I do a major editing aka I’m editing nearly all day. And please tell me if any of the chapters are **** I’ll edit it. Thx for reading my first ever novel I’ve been working on a novel actually thinking about it instead of going with just my thoughts it’s called Dungeon master 69.
Only problem is grammar in early chaps and I was worried that it would ruin the story because I dropped a novel because of the grammar.I like this so far and hope it won't be abandoned I will vote power stones here thanks.
I just logged in on webnovvel on my laptop and I have changed the background. Hope you like it it’s not a custom one I just chose it on the bit where you can chose your background thing. I can’t draw so sadly I can’t make a custom one.
hi im just saying I like the story so far but please make the chapters longer.................................................................................
Nice novel bro. I wish the chapters were longer. Just keep working on it. It has potential. Keep up the good work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍...............
My novel is always going to be free no matter how popular it gets which is literally never going to happen so that doesn’t matter and please comment so ik that your enjoying my novel and I hope you all are doing great. Thx for reading my novel😊
LOL I'm doing another review lol okay just saying the chapters are longer and the the story development is going great..........................................................................................................................