Stronger. {A Naruto FanFic}

Not bad. However, mc to me seems to be a bit too edgy and dark but not in a good way. Evil doesn't mean mc has to be all moody and 'boring'/maybe??! I hope mc eventually becomes better in personally while still being evil. Also, the mc being Hyuga and being sent to the orphanage is quite stupid as the clan would NEVER allow one their bloodline being out of their reach. Why do you think they have the whole eye x seal on foreheads thing? Its to PROTECT their unique bloodline and him being left alone seems quite realism breaking.

Man idk what to say about this. It's a genuinely good fan fic. It's not some self insert virgin author who constantly makes the mc have sex with anything resembling a female, but an actual spin on a good series. He makes some unique choices too like a clan that is extremely underused and cool martial arts from gosu. The mc feels like an actual character in this not just some faceless mannequin for the author to live out his degenerate fantasies. Overall, very nice. It's good that he grows and hopefully faces challenges in the future and isn't just op from the start cause that would be super boring.

Gentle fist + water stream rock smashing fist sounds like it could be the most powerful taijutsu style and I cant wait for him to be on the level we're he can just beat a kage with it!

This novel only release 5 chaps as im writing this So cant say if its going to be good but based on the 5 chaps its good Reincarnated in naruto with a martial arts system with no level ups he can only buy martial arts from the system Giving 5 stars cause its going to have Gosu web comic martial arts

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2.4. It's not the worst i have seen, but it's quite far from a good fanfic i would say. Quite a few real bad point : " It's gonna be from one particular series, and the series in itself is going to be weaker than naruto so don't expect an OP mc from the start." --> Chapter 10 or eleven 8yo beat Jonin Anko and able to save her from orochimaru mark. I stopped at chapter 11, i felt like he acted like a cringe emo teenager with the hokage. The way he ignore him feel like he is a too much pridefull prick. I read the debate about that with another reader and still not satisfied. Actually i'm even more disatisfied since i know the way author see the world of naruto and it's from my point of view so twisted. The world is a bit different from the manga, with Senju still alive and kicking, but then somehow it doesn't feel like it had any consequences in the world odly enough. I mean obviously this is a critical thing which may lead to a completly different world, with for exemple the uchiha not being dead, since with the senju also being the only one who can challenge them alive, then there may be no need to slaughter the clan. Or at least it may happen at a much later time since it would make it harder for Danzo to convince the hokage that they are a danger to but uprooted. So yes, it's okay but really not that great, far from good as a conclusion. I won't even talk about the hyuga thing which is a mess from my point of view.

Its ok for now but why must there be a spacing/gap when u start a new paragraph. And one thing I hate about fanfics is when people use dialouge in this way Naruto : I am Naruto. Kakashi : I am Kakashi

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I really hope you will continue writing and don't drop this novel, please. Most another novel will ruin their story by making the MC perverted, irrational, chasing skirts left and right and submissive bitchy Mc. Your MC is one of my favorites he is selfish, only cares for himself, works hard, and works smart, and is not some horny dog. Most of all your MC doesn't suddenly become kind when he is supposed to be cold-blooded. 😉

Mixed feelings about this novel. Plus Points : 1) MC is truly ruthless, and doesn't care about anyone's feelings or goals. 2) Isn't afraid of messing up the story. 3) His journey to becoming strong is shown appropriately, with proper mix of power ups and fights. 4) Some good OCs. Nice to Senju clan a bit expanded more upon. Negative Points : 1) MC is too arrogant, disrespectful and anti-establishment even when very weak. That was dumb. 2) MC reveals too many powers initially, so should have ended in a laboratory 3) Sadly the OC from Senju were killed too quickly. 3) MC was never ever in any real life threatening danger. Almost nothing unexpected happens with him, so the thrill aspect is low. Overall quite decent. Has a few negative points, but positives balance it out.

This is how you writing a reincarnation fanfiction The MC was an assassin who didn't die due to some bull**** mistake he made . He is in character even after reincarnation there are no fuccking panic attacks and unnecessary character development he just keeps his goal of getting stronger I don't know why in some fanfictions people after reincarnation keep fooling around instead of becoming strongest and living as they please And some even try to go back to their ****ty home world But seriously this fanfic is a must read

This is probably the best fanfic I have read that hasn't been completed, I can see he is developing feelings for Kaguya but I hope he doesn't end up like any other cliche MC. Such as falling in love her and he tries tells her the secrets about the system and also making her stronger it just becomes to mucha of a burden like that Anyways love it.

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