I think I'm starting to like this story. Only complaints are what I have posted before, but if you can look past them, it's a good story so far.
5 years ago
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Terror_Dimensions
Not bad. Not bad at all. Several grammar and spelling errors, but if you look past that it's a good read. I'd recommend having someone proofread your material before and after you post, so you can limit simple mistakes like that; some people won't read it if they see it.
I think I'm starting to like this story. Only complaints are what I have posted before, but if you can look past them, it's a good story so far.
Not bad. Not bad at all. Several grammar and spelling errors, but if you look past that it's a good read. I'd recommend having someone proofread your material before and after you post, so you can limit simple mistakes like that; some people won't read it if they see it.