Twenty-odd people in the strategic planning department were picking flaws in the proposal in front of the manager. Wen Xiangyang also received a copy. After a cursory glance, she indeed identified several areas needing improvement.
However, bearing in mind the saying "The shot hits the bird that pokes its head out," as a newcomer, it made sense for her to quietly sit down and listen to the advice of her seniors. Besides, Miu Yuqing had helped her yesterday. There was no way she would put Miu on the spot in front of so many people.
But if Wen Xiangyang didn't step up, surely someone else would.
Yang Mei had been waiting for an opportunity to shine. After a cursory look at the proposal, she pointed to the title and said, "I think the title is too generic. And here, there is never a need to use this many adjectives in a proposal. 'Professional', 'one-of-a-kind', these are just platitudes, completely unnecessary! Also here …."