IN MARVEL WITH 3 WISHES

It was irritating with grammar FONTS. The MC became a new person out of knowwhere. Sorry the story was good but it sucks with the FONTS. The MC literary became a women slave. U know chasing girls he just met.

good start but then not so good lazy writing no substance or proper plot line . op mc just makes multy wish ever week gets everything way to easy in short boring

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Grammar is terrible, story is an unreadable readable mess

thestory development so far is going pretty good, the grammar is okay, however there is just to much CAPS lock for me to get into this book. if there was less CAPS lock i could probably give 5 stars.

Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Knight 😅🤣🙂😂😂 by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone 📱😅🤣🙂😃😉😅 up 😂🤠

Story makes no sense, only a few chapters long, everything is in caps and impossible to read, and the wishes are really stupid lol it sucks dont bother reading youll get a headache

The story is good so far man Just make your chapters a little longer. and release Some more of dem chapters good buddy 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾

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