It was irritating with grammar FONTS. The MC became a new person out of knowwhere. Sorry the story was good but it sucks with the FONTS. The MC literary became a women slave. U know chasing girls he just met.
3 years ago
1
darren123
good start but then not so good lazy writing no substance or proper plot line . op mc just makes multy wish ever week gets everything way to easy
in short boring
Grammar is terrible, story is an unreadable readable mess
2 years ago
0
DragonHelm
thestory development so far is going pretty good, the grammar is okay, however there is just to much CAPS lock for me to get into this book. if there was less CAPS lock i could probably give 5 stars.
3 years ago
0
Gustavo_Silva_0811
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
Knight 😅🤣🙂😂😂 by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone 📱😅🤣🙂😃😉😅 up 😂🤠
4 years ago
0
jolyneforevah
Story makes no sense, only a few chapters long, everything is in caps and impossible to read, and the wishes are really stupid lol it sucks dont bother reading youll get a headache
4 years ago
0
cjkilla4ever
The story is good so far man Just make your chapters a little longer. and release Some more of dem chapters good buddy 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾
hi everyone im not the author but i just wanted to say i will be writing and editing this story on my account because i think this story can go places the author didn't even dream of
It was irritating with grammar FONTS. The MC became a new person out of knowwhere. Sorry the story was good but it sucks with the FONTS. The MC literary became a women slave. U know chasing girls he just met.
good start but then not so good lazy writing no substance or proper plot line . op mc just makes multy wish ever week gets everything way to easy in short boring
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Grammar is terrible, story is an unreadable readable mess
thestory development so far is going pretty good, the grammar is okay, however there is just to much CAPS lock for me to get into this book. if there was less CAPS lock i could probably give 5 stars.
Muito bom espero o próximo capítulo continua essa obra maravilhoso a historia ta incrivel 👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Knight 😅🤣🙂😂😂 by the way I don't have to go out of town for the weekend and I will be there at the same time I don't have ah phone 📱😅🤣🙂😃😉😅 up 😂🤠
Story makes no sense, only a few chapters long, everything is in caps and impossible to read, and the wishes are really stupid lol it sucks dont bother reading youll get a headache
The story is good so far man Just make your chapters a little longer. and release Some more of dem chapters good buddy 👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾👌🏾
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hi everyone im not the author but i just wanted to say i will be writing and editing this story on my account because i think this story can go places the author didn't even dream of