High School DxD: The Tale of the Gutsy Sekiryuutei!

The thing is its well written and all its just that this is too similar to the orginal and question is here why should i read it if i can read the original? Your mc took mc s position than does things lmost same way almost same power level each ark...so not for me....

Hmm, seeing how your story is going, I'll just leave my comment: - First it started interesting, but while I was thinking about it, it became boring, it's like the original, the fight was good, but this last chapter, I don't know what to say, the protagonist lost against Irina, and you're not going to say that it's because he was faster, with tremendous power he has, I don't win him, on top of that what bothers me is that he comes back dense, I don't know if it's because he's an idiot, because I see that he plays the idiot when they are flirting with him, but he like: because They tell me this, because, among other things, that is annoying, the rest is good.

The only downside of this novel is the MC so far, it is basically Naruto mannerisms but with the weird charm of issei... He doesn’t take training seriously and just expects to show up strong after some last minute thing and still attracts women both like issei, but he has the nakama, loud, annoying thing like naruto, not shippuden naruto either....... Sigh I don’t know, if the MC can change and maybe work to get stronger maybe more training montages it could be so much better.... Personally the MC has me on the edge about to jump off the novel, maybe other would like him... I believe anyone would to cut off his hand and take his power hahaha

consider these possible candidates for harem: - grayfia. - yasaka. - serafall. - "sona" sitri. - rosewallse. - Kuroka. - "ravel" phenex. - tiamat. - Gabriel. - "Lavinia Reni" from slash dog. etc.

"Your review was deleted by the author" Lol, the author looks like titty. I just review using my opinions. But, you have delete my review. I just can say this novel is ****. Because, I really feel like I am rereading a DxD novel. This novel is just like copying and changing what the writer thinks. There really are still idiots who write stories like this. Suggestions for new readers to stop reading because it takes up your time. Don't try to delete this, i will spam to your story and the comment :D

I don't know if you original autor or not.... Don't really care. Either way, try to read this novel on ao3, it was such a piece of trash.... Somehow, you make mc even more annoying then issei, and yeah, only degenerate wouldn't guess where you inspiration come from, for this loud, idiotic, piece of **** that actually main character of the story..... (spoiler-it's another fucking Naruto-clone, even more, it's like you take the most awful version, when he was 11 years old, and place him in teenager body(sounds already like an worst idea)).

This is just my honest rating of it. In my opinion the mc is pretty much just a mix of Naruto and the mc if DxD ( I forgot his name I think it was Issei) tbh it's just not my cup of tea, but I would suggest reading it to see if you like it or not.

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It's fun. I continued like this, although it is not necessary to marry kai with serafell, but it is still good, although the protagonist is super dense :) it is good as you did with rias and you did not do it as the manipulative ***** that everyone because they do not like, I do not know how many Fanfics I saw who did the same, it's boring if you always do it right, I don't have much to say that the grammar is good and the characters are fine, although the fight with riser is half cliche but everything is fine :)

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I love it honestly legitimately my favorite fanfic right now also has some funny moments that literally made set my phone down and laugh at so I highly recommend this book

The hero is selfish enough to be silly and conceited enough to believe that he is able to defeat everyone on his own. I thought we had a silly logical hero who understands the situation. Unfortunately, the hero is the worst of Asia