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"Rude boy? Rude boy! Awake at once. This divine one know that you are here so make yourself known, lest I do all the hard work myself." That nagging voice crept into his ear, making itself know through a muddled reality.

Yuan Xuelan was floating in darkness, all his senses numb. He didn't know up or down and couldn't feel his limbs.

"I grow tired of trying to rouse you. Fine, leave me alone in this twisted landscape of yours. If you leave me be I swear, I will have even more to use against you when time is ripe."

The world came to him like a blur slowly coming into view, like a mirage becoming clearer. Yuan Xuelan took a breath, groaned but his voice echoed all around him, leaving him with only the feeling of nausea and disorientation.

What was going on?