The First Mage
Author: JustNanaseKun
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A guy named Suzuki Takao discovers that he can cross between two worlds however he likes
One where he is powerful. And the other one where he is poor. but then he tried to live it together while achieving his goals in these two worlds
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The cover is not mine just contact me if you wanted it down. Sorry that I suck at creating one but at least it's accurate to the MC's looks.
Just the eye color and clothes though.
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Currently on hiatus.
Don't know when I will have the enthusiasm to write it again. I'll be focusing for now on the new novel and the one I'm currently developing.
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Thanks for the story... Just me made suggestions.... I think you should add a bit more feelings in the story.... Honestly its plain (sorry for the rudeness)
Sorry for this shameless review. But I'm really racking my brain on every single chapter. So I hope you liked it. I had plans for both stories in the future. Read the spoiler for it. By the way. Thank you for reading. I hope you enjoyed it.
The mc is weird but not the killing the bird part its different in the first chapter he more look like yandere in Different way and how he act its gave me a creepy Dude vibe how he think about his crush how he want her using money idk this how you want your mc is, and he want the princess too idk man ill put mc in the pedo category even he is 16 mc give me a Rapist vibes And the guy mello is annoying
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc