Flawed Enchantress

Great, interesting storyline. Painful how her good turns against her and plunges her into her demise. Reincarnated to the modern day just to be despised. Good work author. Good luck in the contest.

Keep up the Gud work author👍🏻 Nice story line. Interesting plot. Loved how the story began. Dialogues are lively. Hv already added the book. ☺

Nice plot, she is now reincarnating into a modern day world still with her flawed appearance.... Left to continue with what she hates, an appearance not meant for the eyes and everyone looking down at her. Hmm would keep my fingers crossed to where this book would lead. Kudos author.

This novel deserves more than what author than is giving it. Nice plot and storyline. I really want to see when Arian would grow up and be the enchantress she was meant to b

This is a promising story. I can’t say much for now bcos there r only few chapters. But so far, the story has successfully captured me as a reader. The author really know how to stir my emotion. The characters r going great and so does the plot. However, I do want a clear description of the world as the setting. I’m not sure when and where the story is happening. So do clarify that. Beside that, I think this book is great! It’s worth ur time and story only gets interesting as the chapter goes. SO READ IT FELLAS!! ❤️

I must say, nice title n synopsis. From the title I cud deduce that she had a falw, but flawed in what aspect and after reading synopsis, saw she was flawed in more than one way. Nice storyline, some typo errors and not much description of the world background yet, but I know its cause author hasn't dealth with the outside world yet. Anyways nice story author. Keep writing, av added tk my library and voted. 🤗

Hey dear, author here. Yes this is a self review. This book is interesting, if I do say so myself. Flawed MC in beauty, character and powers... Come and have a good read, you won't regret it. Didn't give myself five stars because of stability of updates. Would update more when I get more votes, comments and reviews from my readers. That been said, please support this author, thanks,

I've to say, Author, this is a really nice novel. You've got me hooked on it, tbh and I hope you would continue to update them. Btw, there is no major problem with your writing style or grammatical errors but I hope that you would recheck the first chapters. There were a few minor mistakes but those get overlooked often. Also, please keep on updating. Pickle Out!

To start of, I want to point out how intriguing the synopsis and the storyline are. It's easy to be hooked. They're interesting as well. I'm very curious about the curious. I wonder if it could only be cured by passing it to another. Because even in reincarnation, it followed the Enchantress. Compelling premise. The flow of the story's events are decent. The conversations are entertaining. The development of events isn't fast or slow, enough just to spike more anticipation for the next one. Lastly, I have a few constructive criticisms. Mainly one--which is the lack of certain details in this story. For instance, Chapter 1: > I'd like to say that 'beautiful lady' is subjective. Might be better if there's added features about this woman. Her hair is written but what makes her beautiful? Just her hair? What about her eyes? Does she has a small button nose? Plump or thin lips? I say this because describing her adds more allure. It adds to her beauty other than just saying 'stunning' and 'extremely beautiful.' > I understand the young girl has a scar but I can't imagine how it looks. Is it just one long gash from right temple to left cheek? Half of her face? Add a little more detail. > This also applies to the other characters described as 'ugly' 'disgusting' etc... or just an ordinary character. This is something I used to forget myself as a writer so I often point it out now. I hope I was able to explain why it's important in contributing for good writing. For the rest, Since this is a Fantasy story, try to work on world building. I can't picture the kind of culture this setting has. Key features are buildings, physical attributes, clothes... a writer can see these clearly in their head but remember that readers can't see them. They don't have to be all stated but pick the ones that should stand out. I really see this story has potential so I hope it can reach to even greater heights. Good luck and ganbatte!

A nice story, love the beginning already. Good plotline, nice synopsis. Writing style is okay, needs a little editing with typos and all but nonetheless, it doesn't spoil the work. Your character design and story development are going quite well. Hehhe, I am itching to know what the Enchantress would be like when she grows. Anyways, goodluck with ur book author.

This book is amazing. I love the plot, a flawed enchantress. Well even being good can be a flaw when it is excessive. Author just needs to keep d flow going and update more, that's why I am not giving a 5 star but really love your plot and writing.

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That was really intriguing to read. An interesting plot story, a solid background story, a set of characters to get to know and love, your writing style is neat and cute, and the story pacing is quite right. Not too slow nor too fast. Great job on that. *Pats* Tho, you need to work on some grammatical errors, mostly the punctuations. I did get distracted by them from time to time, but it's not major enough to distract me in reading the story as whole. With practice, you'll do well in improving. Anyhow, I hope the best for you in the contest. Your novel is quite promising after all.

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