A planar shift threatens all order and security. The False God's march. With them, hell follows.
Peoples rise up to stand against the red tide. The armies of man muster in their fields.
With them, stands the last son of Earth. Equipped with the tools for heroism and rampage, he will fight with his new comrades.
Good plot Good grammar Good everything. very nice i say job well done nothing much to say tbh, you've done it well. now anyway there many things to be done on this and im sure you'd do fine. good luck
Well written, this story is. Grammar has little to no faults. Prose is good and dialogue feels natural. I have no critique for something as good as this. I'd recommend for those that love the genre.
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