The Lost Devil

The Lost Devil

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Author: tharkiSenpai
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This is the story of Alex Rutherford.



He was known by many names among his peers, 'Yama'[The God of Death] or 'Asura'[The Devil himself].

NO one dared to approach him. He was the god of killing, without any emotions.



Every life he took, was just another assignment for him...

Every life he took, was just one more number added to the count...

Every life he took, was to reach a certain someone...



"Please spare me, I will give you as much money as you want". A middle-aged man pleaded.



"Sorry but you have already paid me. By becoming my target" The young man said while fidgeting the dagger in his hand.



Splash... The dagger in the young man's hand, slit his target's neck.



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But what will happen, if he suddenly lost his memory?



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Now he is adopted by a couple. He has a job, friends and a peaceful life. He does not remember anything about his past life.



"Alex, what are you doing at home on Sunday morning?" a woman asked Alex.



"What happened, mom?" Alex said while playing on his PS 5.



"Get out of the house and find yourself a girlfriend".



"Why?" Alex asked lazily.



"If I don't see you bring a girl to introduce to us within a week, I will...will... I will throw that stupid game of yours" the woman said pointing towards the gaming console in front of her.



"Mom, where are my clothes?" Alex asked ready to go find a girl.



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Will he able to continue living like this?



Will he remember his past? If so will he return to his old ways or will he use his skills to help the people?



What will happen when his past comes haunting him?



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tharkiSenpai
tharkiSenpai

Shameless review from the author. I know this is not the best of the story out there, but I am trying my best to make it interesting. If you like the story vote for it, write coments and post reviews. I would really appreciate that.

5 years ago
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Dhruv_Kaluskar
Dhruv_Kaluskar

From what I can say after reading 6 chapters is that the story has got potential. The character development is good, the author is trying to make the MC look innocent, not like other novels where the MC is a rogue. The relationship of the MC with his parents caught my eye. Not many stories focus on something like this. I hope you don't drop it and keep up the good work.

5 years ago
5
Speedy_Arrow
Speedy_Arrow

If you are looking for a story, with a bit of suspense in the long run, then it's worth giving a try. The thing which got me interested was how he was portrayed as an emotionless killer in the synopsis while till now in the story he is extremely opposite. He is a naive, innocent man because of his memory loss. The other thing worth noting is that unlike other novels, where the MC's parents are dead or just side characters, here I am guessing that they have a role of themselves. Their relationship with the MC is also one of the focal points. Overall if the story is not dropped, it has great potential.

5 years ago
3
Charlie_theChaplin
Charlie_theChaplin

The story is going well and now we have daily updates. The character development seems fine while the plot is somewhat unique. I hope you don't drop it

5 years ago
2
Zeus_the_GOD
Zeus_the_GOD

I can only say, it's good, worth giving a try... Well, the number of chapters is not very much that's the only downfall. Love it hope you update daily.

5 years ago
2
The_Lonely_Guy
The_Lonely_Guy

Well, my review is kind of biased. This guy is a friend of mine so don't take my word when I saw thqt the story is good and it's worth a try. Try on your own and if you like it write a review and if you don't like it then also write a review about the things you are not satisfied with. It's helpful to the writer.

5 years ago
2
ryfulrifle
ryfulrifle

A great read. There are some grammar issues and some paragraphs need some fluidity but everyone makes mistakes. Looking forward to the MC's relationship. A memory-loss MC is a rare catch on this site. I'm looking forward to events that will bring some sort of PTSD symptoms, like when he kills accidentally to protect.

5 years ago
2
Zeus_the_GOD
Zeus_the_GOD

Nice... I like the story. I hope you won't drop it midway....................................................................................................................................................................................................xpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpxpxppxpxpxpxpx.

5 years ago
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FontFaceMagneto
FontFaceMagneto

True it my not be the best novel out here, but it got its own vibe. I really like your work, I've been voting it not until you post the last chap.

5 years ago
1
Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_Bat

Its really a hidden gem.....Why its not getting enough reviews....more people should read this novel.....maybe because of the stability of updates is low.....since the novel is in its early stages...you need more stable updates for people to get interested in it.... Author you should really keep up the good work and do more updates.....Since the novel is really promising.

5 years ago
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DevilsArray
DevilsArray

worth the time and energy. its a thriller with great deal of info presented nicely. the story flows smoothly and the suspense catches ur interest. great work and dedication. more please

5 years ago
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Claudia_Harlow
Claudia_Harlow

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4 years ago
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