"Quotations" = spoken words (It may be hard to pick up who's talking sorry about that - first time writing novel)
3rd Person Narration = When spoken like its an overview of what's happening (I'll try to notify you, the readers when this will happen.)
'Thoughts' = what the character is thinking
This is my first novel. My writing gets better in the late chapters I think? I'll edit the original few once I have more time. Thank you for understanding!
(I'm not a writer, this is not a hobby, I'm literally just writing. So don't be too harsh!)