Demon

(Random Disciple)

"I am Guang De! I challenge Brother Hicksbess to a duel. The fight will end when one of us knocks the other out!"

Hicks sighs and gets into a fighting position.

(Hicks)

"I go by Hicks now Brother De, anyway I accept shall we start now?"

(Guang De)

"All right! 3... 2.... 1..... START!!"

As soon as Guang De says start Hicks dashes in front of him. Shocked, Guang De throws a punch that Hicks dodges with ease

(Argent)

"Hey get 7 feet away from him I want you to try something"

Hicks backs away from Guang De far enough to seem like 7 feet.

Guang De stands shocked seeing how fast Hicks is

(Guang De)

"Ha... so you retreat, after a sudden attack you run in fear!

(Hicks)

sarcastically "yes Brother De you are quite the figure"

(Argent)

"Alright, so stick your hand out and focus an "adequate" amount of Qi into it"

Hicks sticks out his hand but instead of putting an adequate amount of Qi he puts all in all his energy.

The ground suddenly starts shaking and a huge yellow aura starts emitting from Hicks with electricity around him. Then the aura and the electricity turn red. The aura turns hot and crackling sounds can be heard from the aura.

(Argent)

"IDIOT, What are you doing are you trying to flatten this place?!?!"

The ground starts cracking and pieces of buildings around him start to fall on the ground. Hicks ignores Argent and just stares Guang De. Guang De stands there in shock then suddenly collapses. He looks at Hicks and sees a HUGE killing intent around him taking the form of the devil. All the other disciples that were watching are getting hit by all the falling debris from the buildings.

(Argent)

"Hicks stop or you'll kill everyone around you"

Hicks ignores Argent. Guang De looks at Hicks and sees that his eyes are glowing red

(Guang De)

"HE'S A DEMON!!! HELP ME!!! HIS EYES!!!! HE'S A DEMON!!!!"

(Argent)

"Demon? Ha.. I like the ring to that. Hicks the Demon of Fortune!"

Hicks' eyes are glowing red. Just like before when he faced the demon beast. He has lost all control of his senses. He isn't moving and Guang De takes this chance to go and hide in the crowd of disciples that are too scared to move. Then in his reached out hand a small ball of energy is created. The ball starts out red and small, like the size of a golf ball. Then grows into the size of a basketball.

(Hicks)

"GOD OF FORTUNE'S EDICT"

The ball of energy starts flying towards the crowd of disciples. The disciples are too scared to move and just watch the ball. As the ball flys towards them it rips through the air and leaves a huge path on the floor. But halfway before it reaches the students the ball explodes creating a huge cloud of dust.

Hicks' eyes go back to normal

(Hicks)

exhausted" What happened? What is going o-"

He passes out

In the center of the explosion as the dust clears, An old man with his hand out appears. He blocked the ball of energy with one hand

(Guang De)

"Grandmaster Zhang Daoling!!!"

Then out of nowhere 2 hooded people that looked like they had rushed over jump off a building and land next to Zhang Daoling. They remove their hoods then long red hair comes out of their hoods. They are two girls. They are wearing masks and so their identity is hidden

(The Two Red Haired People)

"Grandmaster Zhang Daoling sorry we couldn't keep up."

(Zhang Daoling)

"It's fine, pick him up and take him to my isolation chamber. He has used all his energy in that attack"

One of the girls picks him up and they both leap and disappear.

Zhang Daoling stands there. Speechless as he looks around. He then feels a small pain in his hand. He looks at his hand and it is bruised. He smiles

(Zhang Daoling)

* A mere Qi-Gathering Disciple did all this? Haha, this new generation is full of surprises.*

Zhang Daoling turns around and looks at the crowd of disciples

(Zhang Daoling)

"Are you just going to stand there or fix all this damage?! HAUL ASS!!!"

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