The original chapter 1 that I trashed

Since I have to be doing school work I'll post some trashed chapters every now and then

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~A boy named Hicksbess walks through the street. He bumps into a young man

(The Young Man)

"Watch it loser do you know who I am? I'm Chizhu Ning"

(Hicksbess)

"Well f**k"

Chizhu Ning punches Hicksbess knocking him to the floor. Hicks gets up and tries to run at Chizhu Ning but trips on a rock and passes out. Hicks wakes up and sees that there is a group of disciples laughing at him

(Random Disciple)

"Ha I can't believe he tripped on a rock and passed out for 2 hours hahahaha!!!"

(Hicksbess)

"What is going on"

(Chizhu Ning)

"You got beaten by a rock loser"

Hicksbess gets up and snaps his neck and dies

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If you can't tell I gave up on this chapter very quickly