Deal

Author's note: With this one FINAL experiment (for the in-between chapters), I'm trying to be a little more on the nose with dialogue, character, and narrative. Please let me know if it's too simple or you like things less vague. You don't even have to give me an explanation, just if it is or isn't. Regardless, in the future I'll still shift between vague and simple depending on the point in the story. I just want to know how simple is too simple. For example if I said: "Thomas felt angered that Doevm said he was naïve. He wondered why Doevm would say that. He concluded it was because blah blah blah." I appreciate everything my community has contributed to my growth as a writer and this is the last thing I'll pressure you guys on for a while. Now back to the story…

"Human, monster, you talk as if those are two different things," Shay said.