Tomes of knowledge Banished

Continue this story, author! You've got great potential. Don't get disheartened by the lack of views/reviews. Everyone starts at the bottom. Continue writing and climb your way up! I'll be waiting to see what will happen to Chiyo from then on. Good luck! 😊

I loved this one ! Your writing style is amazing, while reading the story all the characters are vivid and flow is really good. Waiting for upcoming chapters !!

Keep updating! Your writing style and the pacing of the story is good. You did a really nice job, especially with the description. Keep writing! ❤️

I read all the chapters posted so far. The story is developing nicely. Stability of updates is good. Character design is good. World background is good too. Writing quality is good. The story is different. All the best.

Great start. Keep writing. Waiting for more chapters to read in the future!! Just keep in the mind that taking some breathing space is not bad but please do make sure to come back and write more. I hope you would get your inspiration back even during these difficult times and win!!! Best of luck to you!!

This is an exquisite piece of work that brings me to tears that I have read all available chapters right now :') Dear Author, You have a gift with words and creative expression. I hope that you have the confidence to write more! It may not have enough views right now... but your world and characters are enthralling! I'm rooting for a character so different from me, but I empathize with them. Great work! <3

Ohhh I love your writing! The way you described things are very well-written. I especially love the introduction. You successfully drew my attention. Your writing keeps me wonder what’s going on? So I can’t help but move forward 😁 The only issue is prolly grammar but that didn’t really affect your writing too much. And second, your text block is a bit too dense. Maybe you can consider breaking it down. Good luck author! 🥰

This is a good start to a story. A nice style of descriptive writing and an interesting mechanic in the change of perspective. Coupled with the development of characters through thoughtful narration and well constructed dialogue, this is certainly an enjoyable read. What you have is great but it's just a little rough. Were you to focus on your punctuation in particular, it would really improved the flow of your novel and benefit it immensely. Or so I think, anyways. It's great as-is but I believe there's potential for more.

I would happily read this book for whole day! The quality is best the plot is best thanks authorsan for your masterpiece:) I need more chapter please!

The writing is extraordinarily impressive, the descriptions and little nuances give the story a haunting undertone, almost like somethings going to come up behind the reader and give him a spook. Really appreciate the attention to detail and like the field-journal like feel to it.

I like it. The starting is nice and simple, no information overdose and no long description. World setting seems very interesting. Looking forward to the story.

So far, I'm impressed. This book has some quality in it, both in storytelling and grammar. My only suggestion is to make a cover for your book. Nice one author, I hope you continue your writing

Although only 2 chapters, I feel that it would be a good story. I like how you start the story directly instead of having a long boring introduction, the reader's first impression is important, in my opinion, you did a good job at that. Your language is quite good and you're good at using words that can get people's attention. Most importantly, your writing style is really neat and easy to read. Continue with your efforts, I believe you will be a good writer.

If you do continue writing this, do know that you have a knack for descriptive writing that I hope to match in the future. Prose is excellent and grammar is good. I just hope you update cause this has potential 👍