Exiled Clan
Forsaking humanity to become a Demon; the test of morality is inevitable for Rudra but he will persist in the path of Cultivation to reach the peak of power; as He runs through different realms conquering Immortals and Gods.
Three souls belonging to three different beings have their fates entwined.
Rudra a soul belonging to the modern day earth gets transmigrated to the body of an almost dead elder of a small clan of Earth element cultivators.
Rishi the original inhabitant of the old body and finally Yali a Nether Lion soul that fails to resurrect itself.
Rudra with his hot headed brutish nature, Rishi being a calm and knowledgeable scholar while Yali being the ultimate representation of a mighty beast.
The journey start when a incident leads to Rudra Rishi and Yali to share a single body. As they work things out the harmony of the start dissolves as their ideals clash and their goals differ from one another.
Watch how these three souls with their own ideals and goals work ways to use of the shared resources to overcome the challenges that come their way.
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In the about two years of using this app I’ve never read anything with this just spot on character growth. I just binge read 34 chapters of it and the only reason it’s not more is because I’m waiting for it to update. I love this novel and will recommend it to anyone that’s asking for recommendations
It's a nice and interesting story! There doesn't seem to be any visible grammar mistakes. The information at the beginning is helpful, as I don't normally read this kind of novels. Good effort! Keep writing! ❤️
Im not usually one to be interested in cultivation esc novels, but this story seems to be interesting enjoy ugh to overlook that. Few grammatical errors, although some parts are in need of editing, but it doesn't distract from the story as a whole
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I must say that this is a good book to read. The characters and world-building is done pretty well, and unlike many other books that focus only on the MC without giving much thought to the other characters, this one does justice to the other characters as well. They aren't one-dimensional decorations only there to shine light on the MC's awesome or something like that. Although there are some grammatical errors and sentences here-and-there could be made better, they are still good and very readable. Though it is somewhat strange to read non-Chinese names in a Eastern-Fantasy-esk book, that's nothing to fret over. All-in-all, I would recommend you to give this one a read.
First of all, up till where I read, this is a good book. The character development is on point. But it suffers from a sever misuse of punctuation marks. The author, as far as I can tell, has a good grasp of English as a whole. But for some reason, he does not, I repeat, DOES NOT use punctuation marks properly. Sentences are huge but if you read closely, you would notice it is actually 2 sentences and the author just forgot to put a fullstop. Because one of the words in the middle of the sentence starts with a capital letter. There is also a total lack of proper commas. Now, I know I should not expect pro tier writting from a webnovel author. But it is just sad to see a good novel with otherwise perfect grammar horribly horribly using punctuation marks. This one thing completely killed the immersion for me. I read ahead to one of the later chapters, punctuation is still just as bad. I don't know if the author is improving his linguistic skills, but he definitely put the usage of punctuation marks into the trashcan.
The author made such a good story. Like others, it's good that the introduction about cultivation is placed on the very first page for the first-timers to read about cultivation novels. I remember when I first read about cultivation I struggled a bit since it has many unfamiliar terms. About the story it's well written and the affinity, Earth, is different from others. Since it contained more chapters, I'll continue reading. Good luck author!
woaaahh pretty interesting book the cover was stunning by the way:) and i hope you can add more words at the introduction or Synopsis. hihi this was a kind of book i love to read. First chapter and im starting to lovee it! more power to u my fellow author :)
Usually, I’m not fond of cultivation novels, but this one — readers have to give it a shot. I seriously like the idea of an old man being the cultivator. It’s fresh in the premise. Writing is good, as well. Keep up the good work.
Man I am surprised that this book has such less reviews . Man you deserve more I'm around ch 10 and it's awesome till here and inthe end I only have one thing to say - "Grandpa-con" Peace out.
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Good write. Different concept from repetitive Chinese genre. It is good but not the best. Please try to improve some more. Thankyou for the meal.
an interesting way to spin a story using the cultivating them with funny characters and things normally not used by the general MC or just exist in the background/ is just mentioned or almost only used by villains or mobs like demonic arts and the dark side of the world in general. If you got nothing better to do and like cultivating story's then you should give this one a chance.
story is interresting fun character and a unique storyline unlike thoke cliche novels ..................................................................
Nice story. Indian mythology and names. Cultivation world with rishi-munis. Now thatbis one hell of an interesting premise. also makes sense of how some rishis became so powerful just by 'meditating' that even minor gods feared getting cursed by them. Also old man isekai is one hell of an interesting plot. Nice story and awesome potential.