Good so far. I like how in this book, naruto isn't stupid. I also like how the feelings really come through the book. Naruto's backstory is one of the most tragic ever but the canon author just glosses over it. Keep up the good work author!
Also, quick question: is this a harem? IMO, harem will ruin the story. Can you please clarify if it will be a harem or not? Thanks in advance.
5 years ago
18
ONyat
The famous author shameless 5 star review here!
I'll tell you the basics: Naruto starts off with 1 year old and he already has the capability of thinking, not clearly but could walk, talk and think properly. The entire Village hated him and basically tortured him over three entire years - Not giving him food, hitting him, cutting him and cursing him. The main reason he survived through these years was due to his Uzumaki vitality and Kurama not letting his host die.
He was adopted that Kakashi and as two hurt souls, they quickly found themselves attached to each other, one trying to cure the other from their past. Kakashi let his past go and accept his present, Naruto still hates any human that is hostile to him, when he's facing someone that is hostile to him, he is devoid of any emotion, he fights with the pure intent to kill.
I think that if I say anything more, it'll count as a spoiler and I wont do that, personally, I like this story a lot because it's what I would like to read, I hope that through this review, you can enjoy it.
From Yours Truly, Nyatsui.
NYAHAHAHAHA.
5 years ago
6
Lruska
It is a very interesting story. Liking the development of Naruto's mentality, which is different from the original, he doesn't want the recognition of those who mistreated him and treated him as if he were the god of poverty, wherever he went, he was expelled like a plague.
5 years ago
11
SkySight
Its extremely good
because in the original story noruto didnot get Justice i mean his father died to protect the village and he bacame became the container for the kyubbi
5 years ago
6
TypeVos
You all have probably read so many Naruto fan-fictions at this point thinking that this will be the same as all the other ones...
But let me tell you right now, that this is not like the rest. There is great character development, with interesting interactions between important characters, and great, great, great dark-gritty background set-up (had to say it three times, because it was that different). This author has outstanding literature talent, and I hope he can continue to bring out this story potential. Thanks bro!
5 years ago
4
Demarcis04
So far the story has gone really great and yeah that's it i hate doing reviews but what i hate more is when some people give 1 star reviews for stupid reasons or for flaws in a story that doesn't even exist so here i am giving a 5 star rating and talking to much for 140 characters.
5 years ago
4
Big_Player222
Truly an excellent story with great grammar, perfect clarity, and boundless word-choice.
The narration works simply fantastic, it floats exquisitely just like a butterfly.
That coupled with it's amazingly designed and pretty neat cover picture,
I must say that it comfortably deserves to be placed in the top 3 spots in the ranking, gunning for the top place itself in my opinion!
I think that naruto will become menma type person in this novel.
Evil
And the type that will destroy the leaf village.
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5 years ago
3
DaNepz
Pretty decent start I just hope Naruto isn’t evil evil just a hate for the villagers. Anyways keep up the good work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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5 years ago
2
azizonk
This is one of hidden gems!!!
I like OP mc, have self respect, and doesnt belive about "greater good"...
But why cant i vote with my powerstone!!
Yet i can vote another novel....
.........Something fishyyyy~
Good so far. I like how in this book, naruto isn't stupid. I also like how the feelings really come through the book. Naruto's backstory is one of the most tragic ever but the canon author just glosses over it. Keep up the good work author! Also, quick question: is this a harem? IMO, harem will ruin the story. Can you please clarify if it will be a harem or not? Thanks in advance.
The famous author shameless 5 star review here! I'll tell you the basics: Naruto starts off with 1 year old and he already has the capability of thinking, not clearly but could walk, talk and think properly. The entire Village hated him and basically tortured him over three entire years - Not giving him food, hitting him, cutting him and cursing him. The main reason he survived through these years was due to his Uzumaki vitality and Kurama not letting his host die. He was adopted that Kakashi and as two hurt souls, they quickly found themselves attached to each other, one trying to cure the other from their past. Kakashi let his past go and accept his present, Naruto still hates any human that is hostile to him, when he's facing someone that is hostile to him, he is devoid of any emotion, he fights with the pure intent to kill. I think that if I say anything more, it'll count as a spoiler and I wont do that, personally, I like this story a lot because it's what I would like to read, I hope that through this review, you can enjoy it. From Yours Truly, Nyatsui. NYAHAHAHAHA.
It is a very interesting story. Liking the development of Naruto's mentality, which is different from the original, he doesn't want the recognition of those who mistreated him and treated him as if he were the god of poverty, wherever he went, he was expelled like a plague.
Its extremely good because in the original story noruto didnot get Justice i mean his father died to protect the village and he bacame became the container for the kyubbi
You all have probably read so many Naruto fan-fictions at this point thinking that this will be the same as all the other ones... But let me tell you right now, that this is not like the rest. There is great character development, with interesting interactions between important characters, and great, great, great dark-gritty background set-up (had to say it three times, because it was that different). This author has outstanding literature talent, and I hope he can continue to bring out this story potential. Thanks bro!
So far the story has gone really great and yeah that's it i hate doing reviews but what i hate more is when some people give 1 star reviews for stupid reasons or for flaws in a story that doesn't even exist so here i am giving a 5 star rating and talking to much for 140 characters.
Truly an excellent story with great grammar, perfect clarity, and boundless word-choice. The narration works simply fantastic, it floats exquisitely just like a butterfly. That coupled with it's amazingly designed and pretty neat cover picture, I must say that it comfortably deserves to be placed in the top 3 spots in the ranking, gunning for the top place itself in my opinion!
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I think that naruto will become menma type person in this novel. Evil And the type that will destroy the leaf village. Which is realy good🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Pretty decent start I just hope Naruto isn’t evil evil just a hate for the villagers. Anyways keep up the good work.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This is one of hidden gems!!! I like OP mc, have self respect, and doesnt belive about "greater good"... But why cant i vote with my powerstone!! Yet i can vote another novel.... .........Something fishyyyy~