Do write frequently and some long chapters would do much better.
Thank You for entertaining us home, I hope you are safe at home.
I like the love story of Sara and Jacob, and Friendship between Sara and Lisa.
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Love I've read your story till chapter 6 and I notice a lot of spelling error and the development of the story I would say it's ok. But really hope you could improve from grammar mistakes wise.
Do write frequently and some long chapters would do much better. Thank You for entertaining us home, I hope you are safe at home. I like the love story of Sara and Jacob, and Friendship between Sara and Lisa.
Love I've read your story till chapter 6 and I notice a lot of spelling error and the development of the story I would say it's ok. But really hope you could improve from grammar mistakes wise.
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