just read it https://lnmtl.com/novel/marine-s-thunder-god-of-one-piece
just read it https://lnmtl.com/novel/marine-s-thunder-god-of-one-piece
just read it https://lnmtl.com/novel/marine-s-thunder-god-of-one-piece
just read it https://lnmtl.com/novel/marine-s-thunder-god-of-one-piece
5 years ago
4
ImmortalOasis
this story is unreadable as far as i can tell, the author should get an editor to fix the sentence structure, the original novel the author links has just as bad grammar though
5 years ago
1
ignatius_ogilvy
friend calm down the story is very confusing get an editor and rewrite the chapters in a calmer way, the first chapter seems to be missing the whole first half
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this story is unreadable as far as i can tell, the author should get an editor to fix the sentence structure, the original novel the author links has just as bad grammar though
friend calm down the story is very confusing get an editor and rewrite the chapters in a calmer way, the first chapter seems to be missing the whole first half