Tom lives in a state decimated by war. Looking for the only surviving link to his family, he embarks on an epic adventure that leads him to the most mysterious object of all time...
Very nice use of vocabulary. What is most admiring is its cohesiveness and the fact that it doesn't bore you for a moment. The concept of multi-dimensional universe explored is interesting. Way to go! Kudos!
5 years ago
1
ThePotatoKing
Love the narrative.
Amazing Story and an extremely Dynamic plot.
Like the character interactions and plot choices.
It is shaping out to become an epic story.
I am excited to see how it will turn out.
Keep it up and keep writing.
Best of luck!
5 years ago
1
Brandongould94
I enjoy Sci Fi and Sci Fi tech and consepts, you use them very well and are consecting a unique universe.
what i would suggest and this is a personal opion is that when i was reading a Sci Fi book that you craft a sort of lore or history around everything that is in your universe, such as how did it come to be, types of places and machines or events that have happend in the past that could affect the current timeline.
stuff like that
i hope to read more of your book and see where it goes.
Very nice use of vocabulary. What is most admiring is its cohesiveness and the fact that it doesn't bore you for a moment. The concept of multi-dimensional universe explored is interesting. Way to go! Kudos!
Love the narrative. Amazing Story and an extremely Dynamic plot. Like the character interactions and plot choices. It is shaping out to become an epic story. I am excited to see how it will turn out. Keep it up and keep writing. Best of luck!
I enjoy Sci Fi and Sci Fi tech and consepts, you use them very well and are consecting a unique universe. what i would suggest and this is a personal opion is that when i was reading a Sci Fi book that you craft a sort of lore or history around everything that is in your universe, such as how did it come to be, types of places and machines or events that have happend in the past that could affect the current timeline. stuff like that i hope to read more of your book and see where it goes.