Miaz

~This is a story I wrote 5 years ago when I was 11 lol. I am 16 now and I have come a long way. I had to edit it but I didn't too much cause I didn't want to change this memory. I was very passionate about this so I hope you guys enjoy!~

 This story is told from the eyes of a young reporter in the making. She tells the story of a young boy named Jack. Who gets a phone for his birthday. Jack was bullied in school for being the only kid who did not possess a phone, or any "cool" clothes. So he decides to change his whole personality after he receives a phone for his birthday. Readers will join young reporter, Cassandra Blacksmith, as we watch Jack go down a road of, peer pressure, bad decisions, and a tragedy that sends a lesson to all around them.

The killer phone

I finished the story on him and it made the headlines two weeks in a row! The story got around America, reporters and news channels 'young boy drives off a cliff' and 'the tragic downfall' were all over the news but it was my story that made headlines, 'The Killer Phone'.


                                             The Killer Phone


                                    By: Cassandra Blacksmith


    Jack Hendrick was a 15 year old boy, who unfortunately lost his


    life because of a phone. The 15 yr old boy was riding with his friend


    Sutton Mathews, the driver, and Louis Ken. 16 year old Sutton was


    the driver of the off road buggy with young


    Louis in the back, and Jack in the front passenger seat.


    It seems none of the boys werewearing seatbelts during the 


    accident. Apparently minutes before the accident the boys engaged 


    in a twitter war with a fellow classmate who wishes to remain  


    anonymous. When Jack began to live stream himself and the two 


    two other passenger's, throwing threats at his followers. Sutton 


    Mathews egged the behavior along with his friend Louis.


      The lack of attention to the road due to devices caused the driver 


    to miss a bump on the track, and the buggy proceeded to roll 


    forward several times before finally flipping off a cliff. The buggy 


    with its passengers, descended over 500ft down into a uncharted 


    river. Unfortunately there were no survivors, and the search for the


    bodies proved a hard task. Mainly because due to the rough waters


    and sharp rocks, the boys bodies were ripped apart and carried all


       The whole tragedy was caught live on young Jacks twitter page 


    with over 2,000 people watching at the time but netted over 10 


    million views, before police had the video taken down. Due to this 


    tragedy, many parents have removed their teens phones with great


    reason. I think we should take this whole situation as a warning. To


    NEVER use any kind of device or distraction while operating a 


Aftermath