The Descendent Of God
Author: Valanouir
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Its a fantasy creation of my imagination after watching so many animes and reading novels, I thought of creating my own work.
Its a lite novel with Over powered Main character named Earnald Von Eastborn A.K.A Earnest Willvorth, After dying in our normal world, god sympathetically made him his successor in the other relam he created, he gave him what he wish for along with some godly strength along with immortality, Now he is born I another world as the son of the Empirial King who rules gods creations,
This new world is full of mystic creatures, magic and so much more...
as our protagonist starts to live in the new world with his experience he got from his old world......
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First sentence in is a run-on. Try shortening the sentence to a couple smaller sentences. Plus, it would be best to have the first sentence try and capture the reader's attention. I would say something like, "It's been raining for days now, which makes it a pain to work with if you lived in the city. With the breeze blowing strong from the north, one would find themselves struggling to get anywhere on foot. For Kashuragawa Hitori, walking in the rain was a piece of cake, even with the strong wind, he didn't mind it. He was half asleep at this point, holding his umbrella tightly, while the lightning made its debut for the upcoming funeral." Something along those lines would make the story very easy to read. I hope this helps you out.