So I'm gonna be brief .
I just realised how bad the story was trying to be about a badass guy kind of bullshit so ...YEAH, I FUCKED UP PRETTY BAD . The story wasn't going anywhere and I just realised how system FF are so easy to opperate . Basycaly, by using numbers (levels , stats , skills etc..) it just becomes way easier to judje how strong or how lacking a character is by adding numbers to the formula .
And by far , my character just cannot only be reliying on plot armor to be considered good because anger and hate isn't just a motif to be used as a sudden power up . I hate sudden power ups the most , shounen shit that overly relies on friendship power and the 'because main character uses a technique for the first time it becomes way stronger than everything else seen' trope .Ex: Naruto (litterally Kakuzu , from Akatsuki , can tank a goddamned tailed beast bomb POINT BLANK RANGE and Naruto comes in and uses Rasen-Shuriken and blasts him away .... Like , seriously .
Dragon Ball does that a lot too but because there is an explanation to that it doesn't really matter .*Power levels are bullshit.
So I'll still write some novels , another One piece FF and maybe a HxH FF too and after that an original one so I'm hoping it's going to be a bit better than this excuse of a novel that I wasted a whole month on .🤦♂️.
That's it , I hope you have a great day or night or whatever time it is in your country .
Bye .