Tartarus

Its a good story unfortunately the translation are poor that makes me stop reading it. The translator need a good editor or improve the translation.

The general idea of the story is okay, but the translation quality is really bad. There are sayings that make no sense and the characters feel fake. One moment the mc will be calm and then in the next moment he will be raging. Also the pace of the story is both fast paced and slow at the same time.

Does anyone know the raw name or where the novel can be read apart from webnovel.................................... ....................................

Tbh, you better reading a mtl then reading this sh1t of a novel. The grammar of this piece of garbage is 5x worse than a mtl!!!!! I'm speechless like never before. You know, I'm one of those people who is capable at reading mtl novels and for people who capable at reading mtl says a novel grammar/quality is worse than an mtl is one h'ell of a statement.

It has bad grammar and you can't even understand what is going in the story. You should use Grammerly to help out with the problem and edit everything.

Translation sucks.......character design sucks....... won't even understand anything......even mtl is better than this translation..........

Not happy about the translation quality at all. Story has so much potential though. Author should definitely look to getting an editor for this project.

seems like a good story, it's just translated very poorly you can definitely tell English isn't the authors first language, if you had this story translated better I would definitely read it, but as it is it's far to confusing.

How did this even get chosen. As others have said it is an atrocious translation that think mtl would be better to read. Story wise what I can read it's not bad but it is of course full of cliches. Would be better to find the real name and get it on mtl than read here.

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Conceptually very interesting but the quality of the translation is so poor that it is nearly unintelligible. I really tried to like this one

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't know about this one

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