Harry Potter and the Phoenix

Another great chapter. Story looks good. Harry showed draco his place. Cant wait to read more. Another great chapter. Story looks good. Harry showed draco his place. Cant wait to read more.

Can't believe I stumbled into this story on Webnovel. Considering the fact that the entire fanfic section of Webnovel is quite notorious for cliches and trashy writing style, this novel is quite the fresh breath of air. I hope the author would never abandon this story and we, the readers, would get to read this story to it's epilogue, which I hope is a long way down the road.

So far it has been very well written, with few mistakes and none that break immersion. The chapter length is good and the story doesn’t feel rushed or to slow, which is a hard mark to hit truthfully. Overall it’s a very enjoyable read to far and I hope the author keeps it up!

Absolutely love it. Hope for a faster update. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

I can't say anything about updates and story development because of the few chapters and content at the moment, but I appreciate the length of them, they all have content. In most stories 3 to 5 chapters equal to 1 in this story. The chapters are all well-written use spacing and paragraphs and for a fan-fiction good spelling and grammar(in my opinion as a non-native speaker). It seems that the plot is well crafted, but the future will tell and I have not noticed any glaring plot holes or character suddenly acting outside set behaviour. It seems to play mainly in the Harry Potter Verse with part of the Mutants acting as his family and deviates enough from the original plot to be a good fic and not a bad copy with extras. Up to this point (chapter 5), I can recommend this story and hope the author keeps releasing more content.

6 chapter in, really like this fanfic , well thought out , chapters are decent length , no long explanations or monologues. Just straight into it , keep it up, hope this is gonna be a long one to enjoy

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Nice to see another chapter. Looks good chapter. The Story is great. And the update rate is consistent. The world building is great. Cant wait to read more.

Story looks good. looks good. can't wait to read more.Story looks good. looks good. can't wait to read more.Story looks good. looks good. can't wait to read more.

Nice chapter. Thank god you didn't kill her.Nice chapter. Thank god you didn't kill her.Nice chapter. Thank god you didn't kill her.Nice chapter. Thank god you didn't kill her.

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This story is one of the better ones among the vast majority of other stories and I would recommend it. It has long chapters that doesn't feel boring and so far mixes the worlds quite nicely with the introduction of mutant powers

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