(Indefinite hiatus due to rewrite)
Awaken in hell as the shocking horror of the fall of Abel unfolds. Having lost his mortal life Abel reincarnates in hell, not as a human soul but as a rising demon!
Using the power of Hell's profane system, Abel will descend to depths he never reached as a man. Progress through the body horror of the demon world, one evolution at a time, while exploring the trauma of a life cut short.
Sometimes, there are things you should forget.
I'd like to say I'm ashamed to be an author reviewing his own work but I'm not. I just want to say I'm humbled and thank you to all the readers whose comments got me through days when I wasn't sure I'd get a chapter out. The novels just in its infancy right now but I wouldn't be able to keep a daily schedule without all of this feedback and support.
WebnovelCreators101's Review Reading Status: Chapter 2, but it felt like I'd been reading a thousand chapters. The length is perfect. The author has perfect control. And the ending of each chapter... closes on just the right note which leaves me gnawing for more... Writing Quality, 5 Stars, I am lost for words. It is pitch perfect. I noticed one or two typos but it is entirely negligible. The storytelling-style is very favorable. Every time I read a paragraph, a word or two would jump in and surprise me in a glowingly positive way. It deeply Impresses me with every read. Stability of Updates, 5 Stars, after I read the first chapter I was worried if the next chapter would take a long time, and it turns out I was not to worry, because I woke up the very next day to find the second chapter waiting to be read, and I literally squealed. Continued...
Seems well written and updated daily. It's hard to find anything written with a non human mc so this is a real treat. Kind of addicted to the system format so this hits all the buttons.
Okay, so this is a man that knows how to write. When I clicked on this link in discord, I certainly wasn't expecting something this good. I mean it's the guy's first book, and he's doing an amazing job. I look forward to reading more of your novel in the future. Thank you for writing this masterpiece. There may be only one chapter right now, but I can tell this will be a hit. That's all, thank you for comment ng to my TED Talk. ~ Wolf out
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This is amazing, I can't begin to find the words to describe this work but I have to say keep up the good work. The pacing is great as the world slowly unravel its self. Wordings and descriptions are on point as you get to immerse yourself in the character, scene or situation. Sigh, if only web novel would allow some background music that would play as you read...that'd be even better.
Extremely well written for a first time writer. Though it is a bit dark, if you like that sort of thing you'll definitely love this book. Great start, I'm really enjoying it. Keep it up author!
Very high potential but seems a little bit like Custom make demon king. Except better storyline and system but written worse. /////////////////////////////////
Right from the start, you can practically FEEL the world with how vivid the descriptions are. The premise is interesting. Horror isn't usually my thing, but I am absolutely loving this!
An absolute gem it is a story that has a similar beginning to custom made demon king but darker and more gory while still being awesome. Hope it is not dropped
First things first, the novels quality. If you enjoy system novels like chrysalis or solo levelling, you'll surely enjoy this novel. One of the authors strong sides is his vocubulary. That's a neat strong side when your story takes place inside of hell(spoiler alert, it does). The novel has darker theme, you won't get your "Reincarnated as a slime" feel from it.
The story is original, and I love the way the author portrays the thoughts. The way the plot unfolds, is very exhilarating and full of suspense. This is a must read book, it's already one of my favorites. Good story, good plot good stuff.
So ive read up to Chapter 10, and I have to say that this novel is quite good compared to many on this sight. It skip** over unneeded nonsense and jumps right into pure and unadulterated violence. So far the writing quality is great, and the plot is steady. Although its still to early to tell, and I would like to see more chapters before I can really decide how good this book will be, id say it had great potential. Great Job author <3
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The story is well written and very entertaining. Each chapter has a suspenseful ending, making one want to read more. The top writing quality allows one to immerse in the story, making it even more enjoyable. Definitely entertaining throughout. This novel is a very good read and you should definitely try it!!!!!