Chapter 1:one bloody night

There was blood every room your boyfriend was betting your head good job your boyfriend said Jay I kill someone that's ok you said it's fine angel your going to be ok this was your first kill you should be happy I have an idea let go kill some one else he said ok... you can't say no to him he always scared he was so nice in the beginning of you relationship one of his friends were hold the girl how do you think I should kill her angel burn her alive feed her to the wolf's or cut her open your choice jay said I don't know you started to cry excuse us boys he took you upstairs what the hell is wrong with you he said I'm sorry I just can't you said you just need a bath but first pick one please he said ok ok the wolf you said once it was over he gave you a bath are you hungry angel he said yes he went down stairs to get your jay was a very powerful man I can do any thing he was and get away with it he coming back I got strawberries some toast and orange he said thank you 1min jay I'm done you said he took the train down to the kitchen jay turned on the fan Because he knew you got hot at night you Laid on his chest and went to sleep. To Be continued I want your full opinion do you think the story is nice