The Dream to reach Elysian Fields

Cool novel btw, really liked the development of the plot. The wording you used is also funny and amusing at the same time, it's really enjoying to read. Though, in my opinion, the chapters are kinda short, i'll truly appreciate it if you make it longer =3=)). But overall, the novel is great. Keep it up ^^.

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

( I don't usually give 5 stars to incomplete books. I mostly give perfect stars to translated novels ) I have read the first four chapters of your book, you want us to imagine the gore, the scene mostly and the plot itself. Capitalization, grammar and spelling, these were also my biggest problem when I started writing, but as I always say to other authors, writing is a process, you learn as you write. You can edit it tho, you can use Grammarly or Proofreader. ( Proofreader has free features ) it's quite good to use. Instead of phrasing *pants* *sigh*, you can tell and show it to us, readers what you wanted to convey, just don't drag it too long or else readers will be bored asf ( Hmm, I have this prob ) I want more Description and Narration from your novel, I am also writing a fantasy novel thus I know how crucial and how important hese descriptions are. ( But sometimes, readers tend to skip it anyway. ) ' Minimal description and narration, but not lacking. ' I can clearly see that you have a beautiful plot here... I'm hoping to see more from you Author sama! Happy writing!

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I really liked the writing style and I am eagerly waiting for more chapters... interesting plot so far...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]